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The chat below give information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2016, and future projection of 2025. v.1

The chat below give information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2016, and future projection of 2025. v. 1
In modern times, the issue of spending money on space exploration has become highly controversial. There are those who say that should be spending money space exploration, however others believe that expending much money on this field is empty. This essay will examine the positive aspects and drawbacks of this argument and provide my overall opinion. From an overall perspective, there are two key advantages of this issue to find new residential areas and supply natural source. Perhaps the main advantages of this issue that these explorations would be provide new livable regions for human being outside of the world. For example, keeping current exploration of the Mars would be exploring novel region in the short time. A further point in favour of investing in the space exploration is that these studies supply novel natural source. This is because nowadays decreasing of natural energy in the our world and this case is leading to obtain new energy source out of the world. Despite these arguments, there are also various disadvantages to many expending to exploring on the space is that these explorations are requesting a high amount of charge. This is because the cost of spaceships, fuels, technological tools and so do and these study phases need an exorbitant amount of charge. In conclusion, it must be said that invest on the space exploration ha clear advantages and disadvantages. Taking the above into account, it would appear that there are more advantages than disadvantages between spending money on the space exploration or not spend it.
In modern times, the issue of spending
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on
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exploration
has become
highly
controversial. There are those who say that should be spending
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money
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space
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exploration
,
however
others believe that expending much
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money
on this field is empty. This essay will examine the
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positive
aspects and drawbacks of this argument and provide my
overall
opinion.

From an
overall
perspective, there are two key
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advantages
of this issue to find new residential areas and supply natural source. Perhaps the main
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advantages
of this issue that these
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explorations
would be
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provide
new livable regions for human being
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outside of
the world.
For example
, keeping
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current
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of the Mars would be exploring novel region in the short time. A
further
point in
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favour
of investing in the
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is that these studies supply novel natural source. This is
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because
nowadays decreasing of natural energy in
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the our world
and this case is leading to obtain new energy source out of the world.

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also
various disadvantages to
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expending to exploring on the
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is that these
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explorations
are requesting a high amount of charge. This is
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because
the cost of spaceships, fuels, technological tools and
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so
do and these study phases need an exorbitant amount of charge.

In conclusion
, it
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must
be said
that invest on the
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ha
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clear
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advantages
and disadvantages. Taking the above into account, it would appear that there are more
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advantages
than disadvantages between spending
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on the
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or not spend it.
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IELTS essay The chat below give information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2016, and future projection of 2025. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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