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The car is possibly the most convenient and popular way of getting from A to B However due to its impact on environment and the risk it poses to pedestrians and motorists government should take urgent steps to reduce our dependency on this mode of transpo v.1

The car is possibly the most convenient and popular way of getting from A to B However due to its impact on environment and the risk it poses to pedestrians and motorists government should take urgent steps to reduce our dependency on this mode of transpo v. 1
IT GOES WITHOUT SAYING THAT HEALTH IS WEALTH IS THE PROOVED SLOGAN SINCE ANCIENT TIME. CERTAIN FOLKS BELIEVE THAT FOR A FITNESS IN growth AND TO LIVE LONGER, THERE ARE A PLETHORA OF OTHER THINGS, WHICH IS CRUCIAL FOR IT RATHER THAN HAVING PROPER FOOD INTAKE AND PHYSICAL ACTIVITY. FIRSTLY, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS A MAJOR REASON BEHIND OPPOSING THE ABOVE NOTION AND SECONDLY, STATE THE IMPORTANCE OF HAVING SPORTS AND PROPER DIET TO KEEP HEALTHY growth AND LIVE MORE YEARS. ON THE ONE HAND, THE PRIME CAUSE OF GOING AGAINST TO THE ABOVE ARGUMENT IS THAT PROPER DIET AND EXERCISE KEEPS A PEOPLE AWAY FROM DOCTOR. TO ELABORATE, WHEN A PEROSN TAKES A HEALTHY FOOD EVERYDAY, THAT PERSON ACAN NOT FALL A SICK OR GET ANY SERIOUS DISEASES LIKE OBESITY OR DIABETIC AND SO ON. CONSEQUENTLY, THAT PERSON LIVE LONGER AND HEALTHY growth. FOR EXAMPLE, AS PER THE UK HEALTH DEPARTMENT SURVEY, 70% OF THE EUROPEAN USED TO LIVE MORE THAN 80 YEARS DUE TO THE HABIT OF EATING NUTRITIONAL ITEAMS AND CYCLING. ON THE OTHER SIDE, PEOPLE THINK SO BECAUSE, THEY FIND THE OTHER THINGS LIKE HAVINF NICE AND SUPPORTIVE FAMILY, FRIENDS, OR LOVED ONE'S MAKE LIVING MORE ENJOYABLE THAT AUTOMATICALLY WOULD RESULT IN THE GOOD HEALTH OF ALL THE MEMBER AND PEOPLE LIVE MORE. FOR INSTANCE, ACCORDING TO THE SOCIAL DEPARTMENT OD THE USA, THERE SURVEY FOUND THAT 70% OF THE PEOPLE ARE HEALTHY AND LIVINING LONGER growth OWNING TO HAVE GOOD FRIEN AND CARING PARENTS AND SIBLINGS. IN CONCLUSION, TAKING NUTRITIONAL FOOD DAILY INDEED MAKE INDIVIDUAL'S LIFE MUCH LONGER, BY KEEPING WELLNESS OF THEIR BODY. HENCE, THE BEST WAY TO INSPIRE CERTAIN INDIVIDUALS ABOUT HAVING PROPER DIET AND DOING REGULAR EXERCISE FOR LIVING LONGER AND MANTAIN FITNESS LEVEL THROUGHT OUT LIFE IS THE REGIME'S SUPPORT.
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PROOVED
SLOGAN SINCE ANCIENT TIME. CERTAIN FOLKS BELIEVE THAT FOR A FITNESS IN
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growth
AND TO
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LIVE
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LONGER
, THERE ARE A PLETHORA OF OTHER THINGS, WHICH IS CRUCIAL FOR IT
RATHER
THAN HAVING
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PROPER
FOOD INTAKE AND PHYSICAL ACTIVITY.
FIRSTLY
, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS A MAJOR REASON BEHIND OPPOSING THE ABOVE NOTION AND
SECONDLY
, STATE THE IMPORTANCE OF HAVING SPORTS AND
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PROPER
DIET TO
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KEEP
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HEALTHY
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growth
AND
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LIVE
MORE YEARS.

ON THE ONE HAND, THE PRIME CAUSE OF GOING AGAINST TO THE ABOVE ARGUMENT IS THAT
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PROPER
DIET AND EXERCISE
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KEEPS
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PEOPLE
AWAY FROM DOCTOR. TO ELABORATE, WHEN A
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PEROSN
TAKES A
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HEALTHY
FOOD
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EVERYDAY
, THAT
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PERSON ACAN
NOT FALL A SICK OR
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ANY SERIOUS DISEASES LIKE OBESITY OR DIABETIC AND
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SO
ON.
CONSEQUENTLY
, THAT PERSON
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LIVE
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LONGER
AND
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HEALTHY
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growth
.
FOR EXAMPLE
, AS PER THE UK HEALTH DEPARTMENT SURVEY, 70% OF THE EUROPEAN
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USED
TO
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LIVE
MORE THAN 80 YEARS DUE TO THE HABIT OF EATING NUTRITIONAL
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ITEAMS
AND CYCLING.

ON THE OTHER SIDE,
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PEOPLE
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LIVING MORE ENJOYABLE THAT
AUTOMATICALLY
WOULD RESULT IN THE
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GOOD
HEALTH OF ALL THE MEMBER AND
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PEOPLE
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LIVE
MORE.
FOR INSTANCE
, ACCORDING TO THE SOCIAL DEPARTMENT OD THE USA, THERE SURVEY FOUND THAT 70% OF THE
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PEOPLE
ARE
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HEALTHY
AND
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LIVINING
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LONGER
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growth
OWNING TO HAVE
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GOOD
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FRIEN
AND CARING PARENTS AND SIBLINGS.

IN CONCLUSION
, TAKING NUTRITIONAL FOOD DAILY
INDEED
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MAKE
INDIVIDUAL'S LIFE MUCH
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LONGER
, BY KEEPING WELLNESS OF THEIR BODY.
HENCE
, THE BEST WAY TO INSPIRE CERTAIN INDIVIDUALS ABOUT HAVING
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PROPER
DIET AND DOING REGULAR EXERCISE FOR LIVING
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LONGER
AND
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MANTAIN
FITNESS LEVEL
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THROUGHT OUT
LIFE IS THE REGIME'S SUPPORT.
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IELTS essay The car is possibly the most convenient and popular way of getting from A to B However due to its impact on environment and the risk it poses to pedestrians and motorists government should take urgent steps to reduce our dependency on this mode of transpo v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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