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The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches.
English, which is an international language and dominates the entire world, is considered to be easy to learn from native teachers via studying. According to my perspective, though studying with native teachers has some benefits, the other alternatives also seem to be valuable to learn English. The benefits of studying English with native speakers seem to bring benefits in certain ways; the first and foremost is excessive knowledge about the basics of the language, which are difficult to grasp with the help of other methods, help the learner to avoid the mistakes in terms of theoretical and practical. For instance, the teachers who have a masters degree in English may know better how to teach the pupils; they can clear all the specific concepts, which are considered tough to understand. Moreover, as the teacher has innovative teaching skills that are unique for a student to polish more in the language, A person is likely to be more enthusiastic, thereby spending time with the native teacher. Getting knowledge from the native teacher is not a bad idea; being fluent in English seems to be easy in this fast learning world. People have an option to get knowledge of English from the internet, textbooks, and many more. The textbooks, which are available in the market, can easily make the learner understand all the basic concepts of English without any wastage of time. Furthermore, the Internet tends to provide the whole information with one click, whereby learners can join the blogs online, where the people learn from each other, and they can also use YouTube for getting the daily lessons of English. In conclusion, both the methods have their own significance, either it is native teachers or alternatives; hence, not any single should be underestimated to enhance the learning among learners.
English, which is an international language and dominates the entire world,
is considered
to be easy to learn from
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native
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teachers
via studying. According to my perspective, though studying with
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native
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teachers
has
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some
benefits, the other alternatives
also
seem to be valuable to learn English.

The benefits of studying English with
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native
speakers seem to bring benefits in certain ways; the
first
and foremost is excessive knowledge about the basics of the language, which are difficult to grasp with the
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help
of other methods,
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help
the
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learner
to avoid the mistakes in terms of theoretical and practical.
For instance
, the
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teachers
who have a
For an academic degree, use "master’s".
masters
degree in English may know better how to teach the pupils; they can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
all the specific concepts, which
are considered
tough to understand.
Moreover
, as the
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teacher
has innovative teaching
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
that are unique for a student to polish more in the language,

A person is likely to be more enthusiastic, thereby spending time with the
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native
teacher.

Getting knowledge from the
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native
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teacher
is not a
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bad
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idea
; being fluent in English seems to be easy in this
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fast
learning world.
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People
have an option to
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get
knowledge of English from the internet, textbooks, and
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many
more. The textbooks, which are available in the market, can
easily
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make
the
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learner
understand all the basic concepts of English without any wastage of time.
Furthermore
, the Internet tends to provide the whole information with one click, whereby
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learners
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the blogs online, where the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
learn from each other, and they can
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
YouTube for getting the daily lessons of English.

In conclusion
, both the methods have their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
significance, either it is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
native
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers
or alternatives;
hence
, not any single should
be underestimated
to enhance the learning among
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learners
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
298 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
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