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The below chart gives information the data of immigration emigration and net migration in UK between 1999 and 2008 summarize the chart at least 150 words v.1

The below chart gives information the data of immigration emigration and net migration in UK between 1999 and 2008 summarize the chart at least 150 words v. 1
Most of the people in this world calculated the person's value depending on the money Where as values which have been given importance in the olden days like virtue, truth, generosity is forgotten. In my Opinion a man can be judged based on his personality traits, but not on the material Possessions. First, measuring a person's worth based on the qualities like social status and money is completely erroneous. For instance, we are not estimating our parent's based on the properties they have. As follows one cannot measure an individual's value depending on the belongings. If we are eccentric about material gains then the world will become a bad place to live. Also, as per the survey conducted by the Psychology department of John Hopkins University it's been revealed that many in the society given respect to the rich has increased drastically in the last ten years from 30% to 50%. It shows how materialistic we are. On the Contrary, Some people argue that they are respecting the rich people because of the qualities they have. If this is the case, then it's acceptable to revere such kind of persons which are richer. For example, everybody in this globe respects Bill Gates due to his character and the accomplishments made by him. In the world there should be a parity of respecting the kind human beings and intellectual human beings. The conclusion is, even though we should respect a person depends on the money he has, but it's not the only benchmark to certify a man's character. We can encourage the nice qualities in a generous human being, so that it will set an example for the children to follow in the shoes of the Kind man.
Most of the
people
in this world calculated the person's value depending on the money
Where as
values which have been
given
importance in the olden days like virtue, truth, generosity
is forgotten
. In my Opinion a
man
can
be judged
based on his personality traits,
but
not on the material Possessions.

First
, measuring a person's worth based on the qualities like social status and money is completely erroneous.
For instance
, we are not estimating our parent's based on the properties they have.
As
follows one cannot measure an individual's value depending on the belongings.

If we are eccentric about material gains then the world will become a
bad
place to
live
.
Also
, as per the survey conducted by the Psychology department of John Hopkins University it's
been revealed
that
many
in the society
given
respect to the rich has increased
drastically
in the last ten years from 30% to 50%. It
shows
how materialistic we are.

On the Contrary
,
Some
people
argue that they are respecting the rich
people
because
of the qualities they have. If this is the case, then it's acceptable to revere such kind of persons which are richer.
For example
, everybody in this globe respects Bill Gates due to his character and the accomplishments made by him. In the world there should be a parity of respecting the kind human beings and intellectual human beings.

The conclusion is,
even though
we should respect a person depends on the money he has,
but
it's not the
only
benchmark to certify a
man
's character. We can encourage the nice qualities in a generous human being,
so
that it will set an example for the children to follow in the shoes of the Kind
man
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay The below chart gives information the data of immigration emigration and net migration in UK between 1999 and 2008 summarize the chart at least 150 words v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
287 words
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