The bar chart below shows the number of employees from the European Union in the United States (1999) v.3
The bar chart below shows the number of employees from the European Union in the United States (1999) v. 3
The diagram depicts how many people from European Union countries worked in the United States in 1999.
As an overall trend, French demonstrated the lowest point, about 5000 people have worked from this country, while employees from British show the peak rate in which was roughly 5 times more than French ones. Meanwhile, the second rate was occupied by German workers which approximately 20000 people have worked in US. Employees who come from Italy delineated penultimate rate which second less workers who worked more than 5000 people in US in 1999. Nevertheless, overall 20000 people from other European Union countries were engaged in US in 1999
To sum up, people who was immigrated t US to work purpose show a peak rate, therefore last rate was occupied by French employees.
The diagram depicts how
many
people
from European Union countries worked in the United States in 1999.
As an
overall
trend, French demonstrated the lowest point, about 5000
people
have worked from this country, while employees from British
show
the peak
rate
in which was roughly 5 times more than French ones. Meanwhile, the second
rate
was occupied
by German workers which approximately 20000
people
have worked in US. Employees who
come
from Italy delineated penultimate
rate
which second
less
workers who worked more than 5000
people
in US in 1999.
Nevertheless
,
overall
20000
people
from other European Union countries
were engaged
in US in 1999
To sum up,
people
who
was immigrated
t US to work purpose
show
a peak
rate
,
therefore
last
rate
was occupied
by French employees.
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11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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