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Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today. Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment. v.5

Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today. Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment. v. 5
English has been a universal language for several decades now. It's taught in almost every country and its simplicity has made it easy to learn. However, you'd find that some of the locals aren't pleased with the consequences, as kids begin to get immersed in English forgetting about their local language. Some even prefer it more! There's no denying that learning English is a necessity. It's used internationally and it can help you study abroad. Also, having English as a second tongue could open up more professional opportunities for you. Nevertheless, it seems to be dominating local languages, especially among younger generations, you'd find that they would start speaking English rather than their mother tongue. It's even used as a measure of status; some people, for instance, believe that being able to speak English means that you're well-educated and wealthy. That being said, is it really important to acquire English as a language? In my opinion, I think that it's important to learn English. It's a handy language and one can always make use of it. However, it shouldn't come in the way of local languages; these should remain intact. We should definitely ensure the survival of local languages, as they are part of the culture. This could be done by ensuring that the mother tongue gets taught in all schools, building communities where everyone can participate in activities that enhances their linguistics and through teaching the locals the history of their language. In conclusion, being able to speak English is great, but one should always pride in their language and never lose it.
English has been a universal
language
for several decades
now
.
It's
taught in almost every country and its simplicity has made it easy to learn.
However
, you'd find that
some of the
locals
aren't
pleased
with the consequences, as kids
begin
to
get
immersed in English forgetting about their
local
language
.
Some
even prefer it more!

There's no denying that learning English is a necessity.
It's
used
internationally
and it can
help
you study abroad.
Also
, having English as a second tongue could open up more professional opportunities for you.
Nevertheless
, it seems to be dominating
local
languages
,
especially
among younger generations, you'd find that they would
start
speaking English
rather
than their mother tongue.
It's
even
used
as a measure of status;
some
people
,
for instance
, believe that being able to speak English means that you're well-educated and wealthy. That
being said
, is it
really
important
to acquire English as a language?

In my opinion, I
think
that
it's
important
to learn English.
It's
a handy
language
and one can always
make
use
of it.
However
, it shouldn't
come
in the way of
local
languages
; these should remain intact. We should definitely ensure the survival of
local
languages
, as they are part of the culture. This could
be done
by ensuring that the mother tongue
gets
taught in all schools, building communities where everyone can participate in activities that enhances their linguistics and through teaching the
locals
the history of their language.

In conclusion
, being able to speak English is great,
but
one should always pride in their
language
and never lose it.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today. Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment. v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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