Technological Advance Computers are replacing more and more jobs. describe some positions that may be lost because of computer and discuss at least one problem that may result. v.2
Technological Advance Computers are replacing more and more jobs. describe some positions that may be lost because of computer and discuss at least one problem that may result. v. 2
Nowaday, Technologies are become more popular in automation. In most of cases men have been replace by computers for accuracy, so that number of job vacancy are reducing.
In 21st century, Business is growing drastically, Job vacancy is also increased but computers which have replace men so that job are reduce. For an example in current situation CEO of company appointed only one accountant, who manage only computers data. There are no need for take men for individual field so that above example one computer is replace some men for account.
Secondly, International company like TATA, Reliance etc. Production System are depending only on automation which are based on computer Program, so that They cannot be appointed more employee for maintain production. In this situation groups of workers have deducted by applying computer based on automation system, In which totally process are comptuerised.
Other phase, consider above example, if production system is totally depends on automation then some problems will create at some occasion. Whenever computer system crashed or get error so that Whole production system can be fail or Produce inaccurate production. if human employee works on that place that there are negligible change of fail system.
As per above discussion, we can conclude that whole world are growing so that computerised system needed for accurate work but in some case computers can give accurate work but it will danger in future. At that place men can solve that situation because of “human are human”.
Nowaday
, Technologies
are become
more popular in
automation
. In most of cases
men
have been
replace
by computers for accuracy,
so
that number of job vacancy are reducing.
In 21st century, Business is growing
drastically
, Job vacancy is
also
increased
but
computers which have
replace
men
so
that job are
reduce
. For an example in
current
situation CEO of
company
appointed
only
one accountant, who manage
only
computers
data. There are no need for take
men
for individual field
so
that above example one computer is
replace
some
men
for account.
Secondly
, International
company
like TATA, Reliance etc.
Production
System
are depending
only
on
automation
which
are based
on computer Program,
so
that They cannot
be appointed
more employee for maintain
production
. In this situation groups of workers have deducted by applying computer based on
automation
system
, In which
totally
process are
comptuerised
.
Other phase, consider above example, if
production
system
is
totally
depends on
automation
then
some
problems will create at
some
occasion. Whenever computer
system
crashed or
get
error
so
that Whole
production
system
can be fail or Produce inaccurate
production
.
if
human employee works on that place that there are negligible
change
of fail system.
As per above discussion, we can conclude that whole world are growing
so
that
computerised
system
needed for accurate work
but
in
some
case computers can give accurate work
but
it will
danger
in future
. At that place
men
can solve that situation
because
of “human are human”.
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20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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