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Teachers should not make their political or social views known to students in the classroom. To what extend do you agree or disagree? v.2

Teachers should not make their political or social views known to students in the classroom. v. 2
Teachers in school or colleges should refrain themselves from making their views clear to the students. In this essay, I will explain why in my point of view teachers should not express their personal opinions in a classroom. Considering firstly the personal feelings of a teacher, an important one to consider is that teachers are humans and they are part of same society, which students come from. It is important to provide freedom of expression to an individual, as in majority of the countries it is their basic right. Tutors are no exception to this rule. For instance, a teacher with good opinionated mind tend to make baffling matters clearer and the ambiguity in any such substances would be wiped off. As a result, children will have a clear understanding of the subject. However, from my perspective, I agree to the view that they should refrain from controversial political and social views, especially, in a classroom. This is because there will be students from various social communities with different political ideologies. For instance, voicing such notions may make certain students from one community feel left out and unity of class maybe hampered. Furthermore, in a class where students from different countries, cultures, and societies are present, a teacher needs to maintain neutral stance. Accordingly, the teaching environment may get toxic and the actual purpose of a classroom will be lost. In conclusion, a teacher being an individual, it is good to have personal opinions, however, I believe that they should restrict themselves from expressing such opinions in an educational institution.
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views
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should not express their personal opinions in a classroom.

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important
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students
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come
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important
to provide freedom of expression to an individual, as in
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majority of
the countries it is their basic right. Tutors are no exception to this
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.
For instance
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teacher
with
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good
opinionated mind tend to
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make
baffling matters clearer and the ambiguity in any such substances would
be wiped
off.
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, children will have a
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clear
understanding of the subject.

However
, from my perspective, I
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agree
to the
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view
that they should refrain from controversial political and social
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views
,
especially
, in a classroom. This is
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because
there will be
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students
from various social communities with
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different
political ideologies.
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, voicing such notions may
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make
certain
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students
from one community feel
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left
out and unity of
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class
maybe hampered.
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class
where
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students
from
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different
countries, cultures, and societies are present, a
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teacher
needs to maintain neutral stance.
Accordingly
, the teaching environment may
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get
toxic and the actual purpose of a classroom will
be lost
.

In conclusion
, a
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teacher
being an individual, it is
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good
to have personal opinions,
however
, I believe that they should restrict themselves from expressing such opinions in an educational institution.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Teachers should not make their political or social views known to students in the classroom. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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