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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. v.18

Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. v. 18
In today's world, we cannot deny that people should be free to express their social and political views in society. One of the principal places, which people should have the freedom to declare their ideas, is school. A controversial question that arises for people is whether a teacher should express their social or political views in the classroom. Some people believe that teachers should not convey their beliefs with the students. The other people think that school is not just a place for studying, and Students should be aware of political and social events; hence, teachers should speak about these two issues in the class. My opinion is that the teacher should illustrate their social or political views in class because of two critical reasons. In what follows, I will pinpoint my causes. The first noteworthy reason is that students will be aware of events that happen in their society, and they can share their views and information with their classmates. For instance, I had a teacher in my high school who taught math. At the end of each session, she started to speak about politics and encourage us to participate in the discussion. Therefore, all of the students with different views declare their point and support their viewpoint. This discussion helped me to understand what is going on in my circumstance and open my eyes. If I did not have this teacher, I wouldn't be aware of politics at all. The second reason which comes to my mind is that teachers are well-educated people in each society. So their views about each subject are very noteworthy. Some students have a family who does not educate well, and they have a shallow look about politics or social problems. If the teachers share their opinion with the student, the student will have a broader view of political and social subjects. Students will have a dramatic effect on the future of their country because they will participate in future elections. Hence, they should have an accurate view of politics and social problems. In short, all the reasons, as mentioned above, lead us to the conclusion that teachers, which are well-educated people, should be free to declare their opinion about each subject. Hence, students will be aware of politics and social issues. We will have an awareness child if they have the opportunity to speak about the crucial point at school.
In
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today
's world, we cannot deny that
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people
should be free to express their
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social
and political
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views
in society. One of the principal places, which
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people
should have the freedom to declare their
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ideas
, is
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school
. A controversial question that arises for
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people
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is
whether a
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teacher
should express their
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social
or political
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views
in the classroom.
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Some
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people
believe that
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teachers
should not convey their beliefs with the
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students
. The other
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people
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think
that
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school
is not
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just
a place for studying, and
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Students
should be
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aware
of political and
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social
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events
;
hence
,
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teachers
should speak about these two issues in the
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class
. My opinion is that the
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teacher
should illustrate their
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social
or political
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views
in
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class
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because
of two critical
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reasons
. In what follows, I will pinpoint my causes.

The
first
noteworthy
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reason
is that
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students
will be
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aware
of
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events
that happen in their society, and they can share their
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views
and information with their classmates.
For instance
, I had a
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teacher
in my high
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school
who taught math. At the
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end
of each session, she
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started
to speak about
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politics
and encourage us to participate in the discussion.
Therefore
,
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all of the
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students
with
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different
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views
declare their point and support their viewpoint. This discussion
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helped
me to understand what is going on in my circumstance and open my eyes. If I did not have this
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teacher
, I wouldn't be
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aware
of
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politics
at all.

The second
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reason
which
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comes
to my mind is that
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teachers
are well-educated
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people
in each society.
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So
their
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views
about each subject are
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very
noteworthy.
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Some
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students
have a family who does not educate well, and they have a shallow look about
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politics
or
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social
problems. If the
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teachers
share their opinion with the
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student
, the
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student
will have a broader
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view
of political and
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social
subjects.
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Students
will have a dramatic effect on the future of their country
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because
they will participate in future elections.
Hence
, they should have an accurate
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view
of
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politics
and
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social
problems.

In short, all the
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reasons
, as mentioned above, lead us to the conclusion that
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teachers
, which are well-educated
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people
, should be free to declare their opinion about each subject.
Hence
,
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students
will be
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aware
of
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politics
and
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social
issues. We will have an awareness child if they have the opportunity to speak about the crucial point at
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school
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
58Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. v. 18

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
398 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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