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Tea is better than coffee, to what extent do you agree v.1

Tea is better than coffee, to what extent do you agree v.1
Consuming team or coffee has become one of the daily routines among humans. Despite of its equal market demand, it is argued that tea is superior to coffee. Even though, there are a few negatives in excess tea consumption, i am in strong favor of coffee because of the wider benefits. Even if there are certain drawbacks associated with the intake of tea I firmly believe tea to be having fair share of positives. However, it needs to be acknowledged that tea has a few negatives compared to coffee. One such negative is that tea is disposing stains over teeth and which may be difficult to remove and cost a lot. For instance, Indian dental association has recently conducted a study among the dental patients who has undergone tooth cleaning revealed that 62 % among them are regular tea in takers whereas coffee accounts for only 18%. This is one of the setbacks associated with tea compared to coffee. Despite the above, what I believe is that tea is having various major benefits. First reason being its medicinal value, to explain, tea contains large amount of anti-oxidants which prevents various diseases and improving human’s immunity. For example it is medically proved that green tea is preventing cancerous cells and helping in natural weight loss. Besides this, another reason is the variety of flavor available for customers. For example, tea is available le in various flavors such as ginger, cardamom, vanilla, mint Etc etra which helps consumers to choose from wider options available. These reasons convinced me to favor tea over coffer To conclude, even though there are some minute setbacks associated with tea, I am of the opinion that tea is better compared to coffee because of its medical benefits and variety of choices
Consuming team or
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coffee
has become one of the daily routines among humans.
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Despite of
its equal market demand, it
is argued
that
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tea
is superior to
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coffee
.
Even though
, there are a few negatives in excess
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tea
consumption,
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i
am in strong favor of
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coffee
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because
of the wider benefits.

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Even if
there are certain drawbacks associated with the intake of
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tea
I
firmly
believe
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tea
to be having
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fair
share of positives.
However
, it needs to
be acknowledged
that
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tea
has a few negatives compared to
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coffee
. One such
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negative
is that
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tea
is disposing stains over teeth and which may be difficult to remove and cost a lot.
For instance
, Indian dental association has recently conducted a study among the dental patients who
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has
undergone tooth cleaning revealed that 62 % among them are regular
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tea
in takers whereas
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coffee
accounts for
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only
18%. This is one of the setbacks associated with
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tea
compared to coffee.

Despite the above, what I believe is that
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tea
is having various major benefits.
First
reason being its medicinal value, to
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explain
,
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tea
contains large amount of anti-oxidants which
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prevents
various diseases and improving human’s immunity. For
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example it
is
medically
proved that green
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tea
is preventing cancerous cells and helping in natural weight loss.
Besides
this, another reason is the variety of flavor available for customers.
For example
,
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tea
is available
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le
in various flavors such as ginger, cardamom, vanilla, mint Etc
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etra
which
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helps
consumers to choose from wider options available. These reasons convinced me to favor
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tea
over
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coffer


To conclude
,
even though
there are
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some
minute setbacks associated with
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tea
, I am of the opinion that
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tea
is better compared to
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coffee
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because
of its medical benefits and variety of choices
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Tea is better than coffee, to what extent do you agree v.1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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