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Task 2: Some people think spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Task 2: Some people think spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. v. 1
It is clear that conversation plays an important role in daily life. Some people think that speaking is more significant than writing, while I absolutely agree that spoken conversation is as crucial as written communication. On the one hand, communication by speaking is very widespread in daily life. This is because people use it everywhere. For instance, housewives usually speak with sellers what they want to buy in the street markets, after that the sellers get information and serve their customers. Moreover, spoken connection brings some convenience to speakers. In other words, speakers do not need to use any supporting tools. For example, many dump people have to use a piece of paper and a pen to communicate. On the other hand, it is very beneficial for many people to communicate by writing. In other word, in some cases written communication is better than spoken communication. Sales contracts are a good example in this case as some businessmen need to have the legal evidence for their negotiation. If they made a deal by speaking, it would be too risky in case a party broke the commitment. What is more, writing is the best way for disabled people to make daily conversations. This is because they cannot speak. If they did not communicate by writing, the would not find the other ways to transmit their ideas. To conclude, although speaking is very popular in daily life, writing is very useful in transmission, particularly, for the disabled community, and for businessmen. As far as I am concerned, people should choose the proper way to communicate depending on the reality.
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clear
that conversation plays an
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important
role in
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daily
life.
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Some
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people
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think
that speaking is more significant than
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writing
, while I
absolutely
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agree
that spoken conversation is as crucial as written communication.

On the one hand, communication by speaking is
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very
widespread in
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daily
life. This is
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because
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people
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use
it everywhere.
For instance
, housewives
usually
speak with sellers what they want to
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buy
in the street markets, after that the sellers
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get
information and serve their customers.
Moreover
, spoken connection brings
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some
convenience to speakers. In
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other
words, speakers do not need to
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use
any supporting tools.
For example
,
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many
dump
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people
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have to
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use
a piece of paper and a pen to communicate.

On the
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other
hand, it is
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very
beneficial for
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many
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people
to communicate by
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writing
. In
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other
word, in
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some
cases written communication is better than spoken communication. Sales contracts are a
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good
example
in this case
as
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some
businessmen need to have the legal evidence for their negotiation. If they made a deal by speaking, it would be too risky in case a party broke the commitment.
What is more
,
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writing
is the best way for disabled
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people
to
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make
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daily
conversations. This is
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because
they cannot speak. If they did not communicate by
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writing
,
Did you mean "they", "that" or "there"?
the
would not find the
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other
ways to transmit their
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ideas
.

To conclude
, although speaking is
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very
popular in
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daily
life,
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writing
is
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very
useful in transmission,
particularly
, for the disabled community, and for businessmen. As far as I
am concerned
,
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people
should choose the proper way to communicate depending on the reality.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Task 2: Some people think spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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