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Some people think that spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people think that spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. v. 1
At the present, it sometimes believed that many people express themselves through a dialog more productively than sending messages to each other. I agree with that and I will extend my opinion. Firstly, this essay will discuss oral communication as a more detailed conversation of speaking communication with interlocutors, and secondly, it will analyze speaking communication is more flexible communication in daily routine and a problem situation. The main reason why humans prefer verbal communication than sending messages is that, vocal communication stronger than writing converse in the long run. This is because they could convey their beliefs more clearly as a golden opportunity. Rarely do people realize the importance of spoken communication at dating time instead of sending a message. For example, in many developed countries in Europe at interviews, having carried out research among employers has revealed that they could identify a qualified applicant by asking him specific questions face to face rather than just read their resumes. Yet another point to consider is that face to face communication is more practical in our life. Moreover, people could get a response to each other quickly and spontaneously, which is saving their time and more effectively when required a decision. Therefore, spoken communication is favorable for daily conversations, especially in case of problem resolution. If it were not for orally communicate, people were not quick to solve some issues. For instance, in the USA, the government to achieve at 15 % higher public attention to fight terrorism use an eloquent speech rather than documents. In conclusion, I am firmly convinced that spoken communication is more effective than written communication due to it is significantly accurate and strategic.
At the present, it
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sometimes
believed that
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many
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people
express themselves through a dialog more
productively
than sending messages to each other. I
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agree
with that and I will extend my opinion.
Firstly
, this essay will discuss oral
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communication
as a more detailed conversation of speaking
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communication
with interlocutors, and
secondly
, it will analyze speaking
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communication
is more flexible
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communication
in daily routine and a problem situation.

The main reason why humans prefer verbal
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communication
than sending messages is that, vocal
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communication
stronger than writing converse in the long run. This is
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because
they could convey their beliefs more
clearly
as a golden opportunity. Rarely do
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people
realize the importance of spoken
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communication
at dating time
instead
of sending a message.
For example
, in
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many
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developed countries
in Europe at interviews, having carried out research among employers has revealed that they could identify a qualified applicant by asking him specific questions
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face
to
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face
rather
than
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just
read their resumes.

Yet
another point to consider is that
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face
to
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face
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communication
is more practical in our life.
Moreover
,
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people
could
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get
a response to each other
quickly
and
spontaneously
, which is saving their time and more
effectively
when required a decision.
Therefore
, spoken
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communication
is favorable for daily conversations,
especially
in case of problem resolution. If it were not for
orally
communicate,
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people
were not quick to solve
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some
issues.
For instance
, in the USA, the
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government
to achieve at 15 % higher public attention to fight terrorism
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use
an eloquent speech
rather
than documents.

In conclusion
, I am
firmly
convinced that spoken
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communication
is more effective than written
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
due to it is
significantly
accurate and strategic.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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