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Some people think that spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2

Some people think that spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. v. 2
Undoubtedly, the method of communication among individuals plays a vital role in understanding ourselves. However, it is often argued by some people that the verbal method of communicating is superior to the use of text. I completely agree that communicating orally helps to convey the information better than writing. Exploring the ease of identifying the speaker's tone while speaking, as well as not having the need for formal education before speaking will prove this. Firstly, speech has more superiority than written words because it easily allows the listener to correctly recognise the mood of the speaker. For example, it is widely known that when one is crying and asked to speak, the listener can easily understand that such person is emotionally disturbed as compared to if the same person was asked to write a written message, which seems difficult to identify the person's mood. Unfortunately, this attribute cannot be accurately sensed by the reader of such written text. Therefore, it becomes apparent that spoken words are more powerful in conveying the information as it is accompanied by the speaker's tonality. Secondly, most users of oral languages consider speaking more powerful than written words because they do not have to learn such skills from school. For instance, a child born into a home of uneducated parents in which their language is Efik, will learn to speak such language at a superior level during his formative years without learning it formally. Because of this, it becomes relatively easier and comfortable to communicate verbally as this is the initial skill learned in contrast to writing, which needs to be studied in school. Thus, this makes it clear that people pick up spoken languages at an early age informally, which becomes their most superior means of exchanging information. In conclusion, it is more powerful to express ourselves by speaking because we can communicate our tones, and there seems to be no need to learn this formally. Accordingly, it is clear that the idea of communicating verbally instead of writing can be vehemently supported. After exploring this subject thoroughly, it is predicted that speaking will continue to be more versatile than written texts, and because of this, people's writing skills will be generally inferior to their speaking skills.
Undoubtedly
, the method of communication among individuals plays a vital role in understanding ourselves.
However
, it is
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often
argued by
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some
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people
that the verbal method of communicating is superior to the
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use
of text. I completely
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agree
that communicating
orally
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helps
to convey the information better than
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writing
. Exploring the
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ease
of identifying the speaker's tone while speaking,
as well
as not having the need for formal education
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before
speaking will prove this.

Firstly
, speech has more superiority than
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written
words
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because
it
easily
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allows
the listener to
correctly
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recognise
the mood of the speaker.
For example
, it is
widely
known that when one is crying and asked to speak, the listener can
easily
understand that such person is
emotionally
disturbed as compared to if the same person
was asked
to write a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
written
message, which seems difficult to identify the person's mood. Unfortunately, this attribute cannot be
accurately
sensed by the reader of such
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
written
text.
Therefore
, it becomes apparent that spoken words are more powerful in conveying the information as it
is accompanied
by the speaker's tonality.

Secondly
, most users of oral
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languages
consider speaking more powerful than
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written
words
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because
they do not
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have to
learn such
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skills
from school.
For instance
, a child born into a home of uneducated parents in which their
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language
is
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Efik
, will learn to speak such
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language
at a superior level during his formative years without learning it
formally
.
Because of this
, it becomes
relatively
easier and comfortable to communicate
verbally
as this is the initial
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skill
learned
in contrast
to
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writing
, which needs to
be studied
in school.
Thus
, this
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makes
it
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clear
that
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people
pick up spoken
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languages
at an early age
informally
, which becomes their most superior means of exchanging information.

In conclusion
, it is more powerful to express ourselves by speaking
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because
we can communicate our tones, and there seems to be no need to learn this
formally
.
Accordingly
, it is
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clear
that the
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idea
of communicating
verbally
instead
of
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writing
can be
vehemently
supported. After exploring this subject
thoroughly
, it
is predicted
that speaking will continue to be more versatile than
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written
texts, and
because of this
,
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people
's
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writing
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skills
will be
generally
inferior to their speaking
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skills
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
373 words
9
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 9.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 9.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 9.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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