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Some people think spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people think spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. v. 1
It is true that communication skill which is one of the most essential soft skill in the contemporary society is being more and more controversial, nowadays. While, some people are of the opinion that oral communication might have an edge over writing skill, I opine that both of them are important in equal measure. Therefore, my twofold essay will analyse this perspective in details. Spoken language, on the on hand, definitely plays a vital role in communication on a daily basis as well as informal events. Firstly, virtually social day-to-day activities that human have been engaging such as making purchases, exchanging information entail people uttering words to one another. Thus, it is not an overstatement to say that lack of oral communication renders us alleviate to carry out the essential tasks in life. Secondly, it is obvious that verbal transmission is potent as the emotions of the speakers can be conveyed simultaneously with the intended message that is an utterly marvellous weapon used by politicians in special occasions. Donald Trump, for instance, in the political election of U. S, he won in the light of persuasive speeches with his charismatic voice, exceptional presentation skill and eloquent manner. Written language, on the other hand, has advantages that would take it a superior choice in several certain situations. From a legal perspective, the document papers involved writing would be instrumental in safeguarding the rights of people, and ensuring their duties. In other words, most contracts are carefully drawn up in the written forms and require signatures; thus, they could be rather solid and hard to be breached than agreements in oral forms. Moreover, scripts which would be survival over a great deal of years are reliable witness history that has recorded exactly progress of human civilization in a plethora of aspects. Unless people have invented written communication, perhaps the contemporary science field will not able to apply the prestigious fruits of experiments undertaken in the pass. In conclusion, it is particularly difficult to define whether verbal communication is more efficient written language or not. Each of them might potentially play a pivotal role in certain circumstances.
It is true that
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communication
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skill
which is one of the most essential soft
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skill
in the contemporary society is being more and more controversial, nowadays. While,
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some
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people
are of the opinion that oral
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communication
might have an edge over writing
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skill
, I opine that both of them are
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important
in equal measure.
Therefore
, my twofold essay will
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analyse
this perspective in
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details
.

Spoken language, on the on hand, definitely plays a vital role in
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communication
on a daily basis
as well
as informal
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events
.
Firstly
,
virtually
social day-to-day activities
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that human have
been engaging such as making
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purchases
, exchanging information entail
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people
uttering words to one another.
Thus
, it is not an overstatement to say that lack of oral
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
renders us alleviate to carry out the essential tasks in life.
Secondly
, it is obvious that verbal transmission is potent as the emotions of the speakers can
be conveyed
simultaneously
with the intended message
that is
an
utterly
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marvellous
weapon
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used
by politicians in special occasions. Donald Trump,
for instance
, in the political election of U. S, he won in the light of persuasive speeches with his charismatic voice, exceptional presentation
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skill
and eloquent manner.

Written language,
on the other hand
, has advantages that would take it a superior choice in several certain situations. From a legal perspective, the document papers involved writing would be instrumental in safeguarding the rights of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
, and ensuring their duties.
In other words
, most contracts are
carefully
drawn up in the written forms and require signatures;
thus
, they could be
rather
solid and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to
be breached
than agreements in oral forms.
Moreover
, scripts which would be survival over a great deal of years
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are
reliable witness history that has recorded exactly progress of human civilization in a plethora of aspects. Unless
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people
have invented written
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
, perhaps the contemporary science field will not able to apply the prestigious fruits of experiments undertaken in the pass.

In conclusion
, it is
particularly
difficult to define whether verbal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
is more efficient written language or not. Each of them might
potentially
play a pivotal role in certain circumstances.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
354 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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