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Target MarketingAdvertisers in the past have used radio and television in an attempt to provide information about their products to large, general audiences; it was once thought that the best way to sell a product was to advertise it to as many people as v.1

Target MarketingAdvertisers in the past have used radio and television in an attempt to provide information about their products to large, general audiences; it was once thought that the best way to sell a product was to advertise it to as many people as v. 1
It is an irrefutable fact that nowadays the science and technology develops to the peak point. In some countries, people want to study in science field in universities, but due to some reasons, they don’t approach it. In this essay, I intend to discuss what are the causes and impact of the development before the reasonable conclusion can be drawn. There are several logics why student don’t able to study a sci-fi course in colleges. Firstly, the marking system in the school grade system is the major problem. Most of the colleges and university allow to get admission in science, if the youngster has higher grades in schools. There is no doubt the other students have a more creative mind and productive as compared to higher marks person. Therefore, that’s the main reason folks do not take science subject. In addition, every country almost entered in the race of technological development, such as space, biological and so on. Because of this, the demand of scientists among every country is very high, because of lack of science student's development is stuck at some point. For an example, NASA tries to make a space shuttle which will do mining in the space. Moreover, According to the NASA, there are tons of metal are buried in the asteroids which will fulfil the demand of titanium in the earth and also produce electricity. To put in a nutshell, I pen down and say that every nation have to encourage their teenager to show their skills in scientific field, instead of selecting students by their grades.
It is an irrefutable fact that nowadays the
science
and technology develops to the peak point. In
some
countries,
people
want to study in
science
field in universities,
but
due to
some
reasons, they don’t approach it. In this essay, I intend to discuss what are the causes and impact of the development
before
the reasonable conclusion can
be drawn
.

There are several logics why student don’t able to study a sci-fi course in colleges.
Firstly
, the marking system in the school grade system is the major problem. Most of the colleges and university
allow
to
get
admission in
science
, if the youngster has higher grades in schools. There is no doubt the other students have a more creative mind and productive as compared to higher marks person.
Therefore
, that’s the main reason folks do not take
science
subject.

In addition
, every country almost
entered in the race
of technological development, such as space, biological and
so
on.
Because of this
, the demand of scientists among every country is
very
high,
because
of lack of
science
student's development
is stuck
at
some
point. For an example, NASA tries to
make
a space shuttle which will
do mining
in the space.
Moreover
, According to the NASA, there are tons of metal
are buried
in the asteroids which will fulfil the demand of titanium in the earth and
also
produce electricity.

To put in a nutshell, I pen down and say that every nation
have to
encourage their
teenager
to
show
their
skills
in scientific field,
instead
of selecting students by their grades.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Target MarketingAdvertisers in the past have used radio and television in an attempt to provide information about their products to large, general audiences; it was once thought that the best way to sell a product was to advertise it to as many people as v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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