It is obvious that art has been located in the middle of all cultures around the World for many years. However, nowadays many of us have been drawing more attention to scientific, technological and economic field for last ten years. I think that there are some reasons why people's values have changed and how measures might be taken to tackle with this situation.
To begin with, one of the reasons is parents are forcing their children to study science areas because they think that the artists creating masterpieces could not make the proper amount of money for living and also they see the arts as a hobby. Moreover, second reason is that science and business create more job opportunities and sustain economies so governments do not support people who are interested in art that is why day by day amount of artists has been decreasing.
On the other hand, some measures should be taken in order to draw attention to the arts. Personally, governments and societies are responsible to solve out this issue. One of the ways to figure out with this situation is to advocate the role of art in human culture, lifestyle and how it exists in daily life. And second solution is that governments should create jobs in this sector by opening more art galleries, organizing exhibitions and cultural programmes. This will encourage more students to pursue art at schools and colleges.
To sum up, art has been taken less attention rather than technology, science and the other economic fields, but governments and communities should notice and analyse what are the reasons and how they can face with this circumstance. Personally, if they not, they may lose their cultural heritage and values.
It is obvious that
art
has
been located
in the middle of all cultures around the World for
many
years.
However
, nowadays
many
of us have been drawing more attention to scientific, technological and economic field for last ten years. I
think
that there are
some
reasons
why
people
's values have
changed
and how measures might
be taken
to tackle with this situation.
To
begin
with, one of the
reasons
is parents are forcing their children to study science areas
because
they
think
that the artists creating masterpieces could not
make
the proper amount of money for living and
also
they
see
the
arts
as a hobby.
Moreover
, second
reason
is that science and business create more job opportunities and sustain economies
so
governments
do not support
people
who
are interested
in
art
that is
why day by day amount of artists has been decreasing.
On the other hand
,
some
measures should
be taken
in order to draw attention to the
arts
.
Personally
,
governments
and societies are responsible to solve out this issue. One of the ways to figure out with this situation is to advocate the role of
art
in human culture, lifestyle and how it exists in daily life. And second solution is that
governments
should create jobs in this sector by opening more
art
galleries, organizing exhibitions and cultural
programmes
. This will encourage more students to pursue
art
at schools and colleges.
To sum up,
art
has
been taken
less attention
rather
than technology, science and the other economic fields,
but
governments
and communities should notice and
analyse
what are the
reasons
and how they can face with this circumstance.
Personally
, if they not, they may lose their cultural heritage and values.
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16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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