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Talk about colors. You should say: - If certain colors make you feel happier- If your favorite color changed as you have grown older- what colors you think look good on you - and say if there is a color that you don't like. v.1

Talk about colors. You should say: - If certain colors make you feel happier- If your favorite color changed as you have grown older- what colors you think look good on you - and say if there is a color that you don't like. v. 1
Friendships often are significant and exceptional, but at the same time, they can be involved. Every bond is unique, and several traits can impact the relationship of two-person. These traits decide the quality of the bond. Talking about the qualities of a good friend. I believe one of the most important traits to have in a best friend is honesty. Not only friendship, but this is the trait that usually is significant in any relationship. A person being honest and truthful towards other human beings is a sign of the nature and characteristics of him. To illustrate, when a person has done something that can hurt his/her friend, he should not try to hide it. Instead, he should dutifully accept it. This acceptance would make the bond stronger rather than destroy it. Another essential quality is caring. A good friend always cares for his/her friend. Caring is something that comes to a person naturally when a person cares about another being. There happens an emotional connection between them. To extend the illustration above, If a person does not hide their mistakes, this shows that he/she cares for their friend. On the other hand, there are several traits that can exacerbate a good relation. One of them is jealousy. It is something which only happens when you don't like the other person. There is a small line between healthy competition and jealously. Healthy competitions are good for friendship, but if the same competition generates grudges among two individuals, then it is not a good sign. A similar thing that goes with jealousy is selfishness. When a person is extremely self-indulgent, this results in selfishness. Such behaviour can prove to be a hole in the ship for friendship. For me, friendship is something that cannot be defined in words. It is something that is felt. They are very significant in human life, and I believe that a good friendship can cross all the rivers of problems, be it shallow or deep.
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Friendships
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significant and exceptional,
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but
at the same time, they can
be involved
. Every bond is unique, and several
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traits
can impact the relationship of two-person. These
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traits
decide the quality of the bond.

Talking about the qualities of a
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good
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friend
. I believe one of the most
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important
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traits
to have in
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a
best
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friend
is honesty. Not
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only
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friendship
,
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but
this is the
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trait
that
usually
is significant in any relationship. A
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person
being honest and truthful towards other human beings is a
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sign
of the nature and characteristics of him. To illustrate, when a
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person
has done
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something
that can hurt his/her
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friend
, he should not try to
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hide
it.
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, he should
dutifully
accept it. This acceptance would
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make
the bond stronger
rather
than
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destroy
it. Another essential quality is caring. A
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good
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friend
always cares for his/her
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friend
. Caring is
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something
that
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comes
to a
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person
naturally
when a
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person
cares about another being. There happens an emotional
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connection between
them. To extend the illustration above, If a
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person
does not
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hide
their mistakes, this
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shows
that he/she cares for their friend.

On the other hand
, there are several
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traits
that can exacerbate a
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good
relation. One of them is jealousy. It is
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something
which
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only
happens when you don't like the other
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person
. There is a
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small
line between healthy competition and
jealously
. Healthy competitions are
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good
for
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friendship
,
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but
if the same competition generates grudges among two individuals, then it is not a
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good
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sign
. A similar thing that goes with jealousy is selfishness. When a
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person
is
extremely
self-indulgent, this results in selfishness. Such
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behaviour
can prove to be a hole in the ship for friendship.

For me,
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friendship
is
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something
that cannot
be defined
in words. It is
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something
that
is felt
. They are
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very
significant in human life, and I believe that a
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good
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friendship
can cross all the rivers of problems, be it shallow or deep.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
To have another language is to possess a second soul.
Charlemagne

IELTS essay Talk about colors. You should say: - If certain colors make you feel happier- If your favorite color changed as you have grown older- what colors you think look good on you - and say if there is a color that you don't like. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
329 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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