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Describe a dish that you know how to make. You should say: - if it is difficult to prepare- how much time it takes to be prepared- what the ingredients are- and explain how it is prepared v.1

Describe a dish that you know how to make. You should say: - if it is difficult to prepare- how much time it takes to be prepared- what the ingredients are- and explain how it is prepared v. 1
Children are the fate of the modern world. They are integral part of our society. Some intellectuals say that they should learn about farming and cooking. In my view, it might be hard to gain knowledge about extra curriculum skills, but it would be remunerative if you grasp the information. Thus, I will discuss further via some of my perspectives. Firstly, Farming and cooking skills are needful for individuals. It will develop your ability to become inquisitive. For instance, if one goes abroad for the furtherance, these skills, play a vital role in your life. Harvesting, cultivating, and planting are the primary and significant values of farming. Attentive nature of an individual can help plants to grow via their often caring quality. Growing might take long duration of time but the fruit of patience is always sweet. In addition, farming of plants wants time every day, but this approach to plants makes them grow stronger. For example, in recent days, people are planting seeds of vegetables in their house backyard. This way they claim, farming at home is beneficial because they didn’t use artificial compost. When they pick the ripe vegetables, it’s very healthy and very conducible. Secondly, when anyone notices that, plant take long time to grow, they know the value for the vegetables and fruits. Due to that, they don’t waste food often. According to a survey by times of India, 40% of people waste their meal. Thus, value the food and farmer more. Certainly, culinary skills are also aidful. For example, when your parents are not in town, and you don’t know the how to cook that particular time culinary skills are very co-operative. Thus, cooking and farming should learn from children. It’s beneficial for their future. Finally, in my opinion, children should learn these skills. It’s not any redundant skills or quality, but it’s the way of enhancing yourself via knowing the roots.
Children are the fate of the modern world. They are integral part of our society.
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Some
intellectuals say that they should learn about
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farming
and cooking. In my view, it might be
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hard
to gain knowledge about extra curriculum
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skills
,
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but
it would be remunerative if you grasp the information.
Thus
, I will discuss
further
via
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some
of my perspectives.

Firstly
,
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Farming
and cooking
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skills
are needful for individuals. It will develop your ability to become inquisitive.
For instance
, if one goes abroad for the furtherance, these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
, play a vital role in your life. Harvesting, cultivating, and planting are the primary and significant values of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
farming
. Attentive nature of an individual can
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help
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plants
to grow via their
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often
caring quality. Growing might take long duration of
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time
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but
the fruit of patience is always sweet.
In addition
,
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farming
of
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plants
wants
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time
every day,
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but
this approach to
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plants
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makes
them grow stronger.
For example
, in recent days,
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people
are planting seeds of vegetables in their
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house
backyard. This way they claim,
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farming
at home is beneficial
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because
they didn’t
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use
artificial compost. When they pick the ripe vegetables, it’s
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very
healthy and
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very
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conducible
.

Secondly
, when anyone notices that,
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plant
take long
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time
to grow, they know the value for the vegetables and fruits. Due to that, they don’t waste food
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often
. According to a survey by
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times
of India, 40% of
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people
waste their meal.
Thus
, value the food and farmer more.
Certainly
, culinary
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skills
are
also
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aidful
.
For example
, when your parents are not in town, and you don’t know
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the how
to cook that particular
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time
culinary
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skills
are
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very
co-operative.
Thus
, cooking and
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farming
should learn from children. It’s beneficial for their future.

Finally
, in my opinion, children should learn these
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skills
. It’s not any redundant
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skills
or quality,
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but
it’s the way of enhancing yourself via knowing the roots.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
The limits of my language are the limits of my world.
Ludwig Wittgenstein

IELTS essay Describe a dish that you know how to make. You should say: - if it is difficult to prepare- how much time it takes to be prepared- what the ingredients are- and explain how it is prepared v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
317 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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