Talk about an important phone call that you received You should say who called you where you were at that moment what you were told and explain why you consider it as an important call v.1
Talk about an important phone call that you received You should say who called you where you were at that moment what you were told and explain why you consider it as an important call v. 1
Indeed, spending time on sports regularly, has definite impacts on a person’s life and the whole society, as most of the experts’ researches. But in contrast, some believe that it has just a minor effect on just a person’s body. So, there is no need to try to persuade people to do training by advancing the related facilities. Indeed, trying to extend sport’s facilities make a society’s improvement.
The first impact of exercising, no matter what kind of sport it is, is preventing obesity. The obesity not only is harmful for the body as it is known by everyone, but also can cause some disabilities in contrast with a person who is in shape. For example, even for an engineer who works in a site, overweigh make him be slower and inefficient in some situations.
Also, it is so common between athletes either professionals, or amateurs to help each other. So, the humanity can be increased among them. For instance, if a person had trained in a gym, even just once, it is observable the sense of helping in there. Even though, it is an individual type of training.
Moreover, a person who tries to be in shape by training, have to change his or her lifestyle, and try to eat just enough, and also eat healthier, in order to catch all the minerals and vitamins and avoid gaining fat. So, this means to eat less meats and other products, which directly or indirectly has been polluting the Earth, such as animals which produce greenhouse gases, or the appealing packing of unhealthy supplies to persuade people buy them, or even their remnant that lasts too much to be recycled.
Finally, to oppose with those people who do not believe on the great effects of sports and the need of providing facilities to convince people in this lifestyle, it is noticeable that doing sports is neither to just be in shape, nor spending leisure time, it is a lifestyle which persuades whole community to live safer and healthier to prevent other expenses by sustaining their health condition.
Indeed
, spending time on
sports
regularly
, has
definite
impacts on a
person’s
life and the whole society, as most of the experts’ researches.
But
in contrast
,
some
believe that it has
just
a minor effect on
just
a
person’s
body.
So
, there is no need to try to persuade
people
to do training by advancing the related facilities.
Indeed
, trying to extend
sport’s
facilities
make
a society’s improvement.
The
first
impact of exercising, no matter what kind of
sport
it is, is preventing obesity. The obesity not
only
is harmful for the body as it
is known
by everyone,
but
also
can cause
some
disabilities
in contrast
with a
person
who
is in shape.
For example
, even for an engineer
who
works in a site,
overweigh
make
him be slower and inefficient in
some
situations.
Also
, it is
so
common between athletes either professionals, or amateurs to
help
each other.
So
, the humanity can
be increased
among them.
For instance
, if a
person
had trained in a gym, even
just
once, it is observable the sense of helping in there.
Even though
, it is an individual type of training.
Moreover
, a
person
who
tries to be in shape by training,
have to
change
his or her
lifestyle, and try to eat
just
enough
, and
also
eat healthier, in order to catch all the minerals and vitamins and avoid gaining
fat
.
So
, this means to eat
less
meats and other products, which
directly
or
indirectly
has been polluting the Earth, such as animals which produce greenhouse gases, or the appealing packing of unhealthy supplies to persuade
people
buy
them, or even their remnant that lasts too much to
be recycled
.
Finally
, to oppose with those
people
who
do not believe on the great effects of
sports
and the need of providing facilities to convince
people
in this lifestyle, it is noticeable that doing
sports
is neither to
just
be in shape, nor spending leisure time, it is a lifestyle which persuades whole community to
live
safer and healthier to
prevent
other expenses by sustaining their health condition.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes