It is sometimes argued that the environment is destroyed by various factors and the responsibility to protect the environment should fall upon politicians, not individuals. I believe that both the government and individuals are equally important and they bring a great deal of benefits to the environment.
On the one hand, the government plays a vital role in environmental protection. The planet's temperature is rising, and it affects our lives. Because of this serious problem; thus, only the government can prevent this problem. For instance, politicians construct dams to prevent floods. Moreover, the government needs to impose new laws against actions that support deforestation. High-ranking bureaucrats should enforce strict punishments, such as long-term imprisonment and heavy fines. In addition, stricter punishments should be imposed to increase human awareness of improving polluted environment.
On the one hand, individuals also make a significant contribution to protecting the environment. Everyone is becoming aware of protecting the environment because poor air quality will have a detrimental effect on human health. For instance, Vietnam is one of the nations that uses a large number of plastic products, such as bottles and bags; therefore, people should shift towards using environmentally friendly products. Furthermore, people have to comply with government regulation of protecting the environment. Additionally, the problem of protecting the environment has been tackled in many places thanks to the effort of ordinary people.
In conclusion, both the government and individuals are equally vital to environmental protection. The efforts and cooperation of individuals and the government will help the environment to be cleaner, thus ensures human health.
It is
sometimes
argued that the
environment
is
destroyed
by various factors and the responsibility to protect the
environment
should fall upon politicians, not
individuals
. I believe that both the
government
and
individuals
are
equally
important and
they bring a great deal of benefits to the environment.
On the one hand, the
government
plays a vital role in environmental protection. The planet's temperature is rising, and it affects our
lives
.
Because of this
serious problem;
thus
,
only
the
government
can
prevent
this problem.
For instance
, politicians construct dams to
prevent
floods.
Moreover
, the
government
needs to impose new laws against actions that support deforestation. High-ranking bureaucrats should enforce strict punishments, such as long-term imprisonment and heavy fines.
In addition
, stricter punishments should
be imposed
to increase human awareness of improving polluted environment.
On the one hand,
individuals
also
make
a significant contribution to
protecting
the
environment
. Everyone is becoming aware of
protecting
the
environment
because
poor air quality will have a detrimental effect on human health.
For instance
, Vietnam is one of the nations that
uses
a large number of
plastic products, such as bottles and bags;
therefore
,
people
should shift towards using
environmentally
friendly products.
Furthermore
,
people
have to
comply with
government
regulation of
protecting
the
environment
.
Additionally
, the problem of
protecting
the
environment
has
been tackled
in
many
places thanks to the effort of ordinary
people
.
In conclusion
, both the
government
and
individuals
are
equally
vital to environmental protection. The efforts and cooperation of
individuals
and the
government
will
help
the
environment
to be cleaner,
thus
ensures human health.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes