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Talk about a positive experience with learning or using English. Describe the experience and say why it was a positive one. v.1

Talk about a positive experience with learning or using English. Describe the experience and say why it was a positive one. v. 1
IN RECENT TIMES, THERE IS A GROWING TENDENCY OF THE MEDIAS MAIN FOCUS TO BE ON ISSUES BEING PUBLICISED RATHER THAN ON SOLUTIONS TO PROBLEMS. REGARDLESS OF THE FACT THAT A NUMBER OF PEOPLE BELIEVE IT IS DETRIMENTAL TO HUMANS AND THE ENVIRONMENT AT LARGE, I AM OF THE OPINION THAT CREATING AWARENESS ABOUT NEGATIVE HAPPENINGS IS A STEP TOWARDS POSITIVITY. TO START WITH, PRORITIZING REPORTS ON DEVELOPMENTAL DRAWBACKS IS NOT IN ANY WAY HARMFUL TO PUBLIC BUT RATHER HELPS THE PEOPLE MAKE INFORMED CHOICES, BECAUSE FEAR IS KNOWN TO BE A COMPELLING MOTIVATOR IN LIFE AND IN DECISION MAKING. ADMITTEDLY, IT CAN BE OBSERVED THAT THERE IS CONSTANT PUBLICISING OF ENDERMIC DISEASES ALL OVER THE GLOBE, THE PURPOSE OF THE PUBLICITY IS TO INFORM EVERYONE ABOUT ITS PREVALENCE AND THE PREVENTIVE MEASURES THAT COULD BE ADOPTED TO AVOID IT. HOWEVER, IT IS IMPORTANT TO NOTE THE ROLE HYPE PLAYS IN CUBBING THE SPREAD WHICH INCLUDES SANITIZATION, FREQUENT HOSPITAL CHECK UPS AND SO ON. ADDITIONALLY, THE FREQUENT PROMOTION OF EMERGENCY SITUATIONS LIKE FIRE OUTBREAKS, WHICH IS SEEN EVER SO OFTEN, REMINDS HUMANS ON THE DANGERS OF SPECIFIC HOUSE APPLIANCES. ANOTHER POINT TO CONSIDER IS THE PRESSURE REPEATED SERIES OF PUBLICATION OF GRAVE EVENTS PUT ON THE GOVERNMENT TO TAKE ACTIONS. WHEN A PARTICULAR NEWS IS PUT OUT EVERY NOW AND THEN FROM A NATION, OTHER COUNTRIES SEE IT. THEREBY, PRODUCING A TENDENCY FOR BAD REPUTATION. ONE PARTICULARLY GOOD INSTANCE IS IN THE 80'S ZAMBIA WAS POPULAR FOR A SCENIC SPOT CALLED VICTORIA LAKE, WHICH TYPICALLY MADE TOURISTS TO TROOP IN BY THE DOZEN, BUT ON ONE SUMMMER IN THE FAR NORTH-EAST END OF THE LAKE, A TURBULENCE WAS FOUND TO HAVE CARRIED A FAMILY AWAY NEVER TO BE SEEN AGAIN, THE STORY WAS CIRCULATING IN THE NEWS FOR A MONTH WHICH GAVE RISE TO THE NEW NAME 'DEVILS SEA', IN THE COMING MONTHS, THE GOVERNORS DECIDED TO EMPLOY MORE LIFEGUARDS WHO WORKED ROUND THE CLOCK TO ENSURE THAT NO LIVES WERE EVER LOST AGAIN. IN CONCLUSION, REGARDLESS OF THE FACT THAT THERE IS A TREND OF REPORTING BAD NEWS MORE RAMPANTLY, IT IS SEEN TO SUBCONSCIOUSLY PUT PRESSURE ON THE GOVERNMENT TO TAKE QUICKER ACTION PROFFERING SOLUTIONS WHICH ALLAY FEARS.
IN RECENT TIMES, THERE IS A GROWING TENDENCY OF THE MEDIAS MAIN FOCUS TO BE ON ISSUES BEING
Possible spelling mistake. 'PUBLICISED' is British English.
PUBLICISED
RATHER
THAN ON SOLUTIONS TO PROBLEMS. REGARDLESS OF THE FACT THAT A NUMBER OF
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PEOPLE
BELIEVE IT IS DETRIMENTAL TO HUMANS AND THE ENVIRONMENT AT LARGE, I AM OF THE OPINION THAT CREATING AWARENESS ABOUT
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NEGATIVE
HAPPENINGS IS A STEP TOWARDS POSITIVITY.

TO
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START
WITH,
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PRORITIZING
REPORTS ON DEVELOPMENTAL DRAWBACKS IS NOT IN ANY WAY HARMFUL TO PUBLIC
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BUT
RATHER
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HELPS
THE
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PEOPLE
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MAKE
INFORMED CHOICES,
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BECAUSE
FEAR
IS KNOWN
TO BE A COMPELLING MOTIVATOR IN LIFE AND IN DECISION MAKING.
ADMITTEDLY
, IT CAN
BE OBSERVED
THAT THERE IS CONSTANT
Possible spelling mistake. 'PUBLICISING' is British English.
PUBLICISING
OF
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ENDERMIC
DISEASES ALL OVER THE GLOBE, THE PURPOSE OF THE PUBLICITY IS TO INFORM EVERYONE ABOUT ITS PREVALENCE AND THE PREVENTIVE MEASURES THAT COULD
BE ADOPTED
TO AVOID IT.
HOWEVER
, IT IS
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IMPORTANT
TO NOTE THE ROLE HYPE PLAYS IN
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CUBBING
THE SPREAD WHICH INCLUDES SANITIZATION, FREQUENT HOSPITAL
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CHECK
UPS AND
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SO
ON.
ADDITIONALLY
, THE FREQUENT PROMOTION OF EMERGENCY SITUATIONS LIKE FIRE OUTBREAKS, WHICH IS
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SEEN
EVER
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SO
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OFTEN
, REMINDS HUMANS ON THE
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DANGERS
OF SPECIFIC
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HOUSE
APPLIANCES.

ANOTHER POINT TO CONSIDER IS THE PRESSURE REPEATED SERIES OF PUBLICATION OF GRAVE
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EVENTS
PUT ON THE
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GOVERNMENT
TO TAKE ACTIONS. WHEN A PARTICULAR
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NEWS
IS PUT
OUT EVERY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
NOW
AND THEN FROM A NATION, OTHER COUNTRIES
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SEE
IT. THEREBY, PRODUCING A TENDENCY FOR
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BAD
REPUTATION. ONE
PARTICULARLY
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GOOD
INSTANCE IS IN THE
Apostrophes aren't needed for decades: "80S".
80'S
ZAMBIA WAS POPULAR FOR A SCENIC SPOT CALLED VICTORIA LAKE, WHICH
TYPICALLY
MADE TOURISTS TO TROOP IN BY THE DOZEN,
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BUT
ON ONE
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SUMMMER
IN THE FAR NORTH-EAST
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END
OF THE LAKE, A TURBULENCE
WAS FOUND
TO HAVE CARRIED A FAMILY AWAY NEVER TO BE
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SEEN
AGAIN, THE STORY WAS CIRCULATING IN THE
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NEWS
FOR A MONTH WHICH GAVE RISE TO THE
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
NEW
NAME 'DEVILS SEA', IN THE COMING MONTHS, THE GOVERNORS DECIDED TO EMPLOY MORE LIFEGUARDS WHO WORKED ROUND THE CLOCK TO ENSURE THAT NO
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
LIVES
WERE EVER LOST AGAIN.

IN CONCLUSION
, REGARDLESS OF THE FACT THAT THERE IS A TREND OF REPORTING
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BAD
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NEWS
MORE
RAMPANTLY
, IT IS
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SEEN
TO
SUBCONSCIOUSLY
PUT PRESSURE ON THE
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GOVERNMENT
TO TAKE QUICKER ACTION PROFFERING SOLUTIONS WHICH ALLAY FEARS.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Talk about a positive experience with learning or using English. Describe the experience and say why it was a positive one. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
370 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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