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Some people think that to reduce traffic problem people will come from rural areas to live in urban areas. What extant do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people think that to reduce traffic problem people will come from rural areas to live in urban areas. What extant v. 1
Environmental problems such as Global warming and pollution is on the increase. It is taught by some that these problems can only be solved by the Government and large Organizations, while nothing can be done by individuals. I totally disagree with this notion. I believe to have a safe and conducive environment, both the Authorities and individuals have a part to play. To Begin with; The Government can help curtail these environmental hazards by creating policies to ban the use fuels to encourage energy saving fuel, such as; solar energy. This is because, most big manufacturing firms built in the cities and towns are responsible for emitting tonnes of Co2 into the atmosphere, which does not only cause air and noise pollution but also affects the depletion of the ozone layer which is creating Global warming. By the leaders enforcing a ban, it will create a safe environment in a long run. In addition, organizations should build manufacturing facilities outskirt of the town and cities to decrease air and noise contamination. In the same vein, man also can help to create a safe Habitat by reducing waste. The incessant use and improper disposal of non biodegradable materials has, consequently, led to an Upsurge in waste pollution. This has resulted in clogging of water pipelines, causing flooding, destruction of roads and buildings. To have a habitable environment, people should be encouraged to recycle materials rather than being wasteful. For example, in my town, each house is paid a fee for every recyclable material collected and returned to the Recycling Agency. This practice reduced the rate of flooding in the area. In conclusion, I believe the responsibility to curtail the damage being done to the habitat involves The Government, Large Cooperations and Man.
Environmental problems such as Global warming and pollution is on the increase. It
is taught
by
some
that these problems can
only
be solved
by the
Government
and large Organizations, while nothing can
be done
by individuals. I
totally
disagree with this notion. I believe to have a safe and conducive environment, both the Authorities and individuals have a part to play.

To
Begin
with; The
Government
can
help
curtail these environmental hazards by creating policies to ban the
use
fuels to encourage energy saving fuel, such as; solar energy. This is
because
, most
big
manufacturing firms built in the cities and towns are responsible for emitting tonnes of Co2 into the atmosphere, which does not
only
cause air and noise pollution
but
also
affects the depletion of the ozone layer which is creating Global warming. By the leaders enforcing a ban, it will create a safe environment in a long run.
In addition
, organizations should build manufacturing facilities outskirt of the town and cities to decrease air and noise contamination.

In the same vein,
man
also
can
help
to create a safe Habitat by reducing waste. The incessant
use
and improper disposal of
non biodegradable
materials has,
consequently
, led to
an


Upsurge in waste pollution. This has resulted in clogging of water pipelines, causing flooding, destruction of roads and buildings. To have a habitable environment,
people
should
be encouraged
to recycle materials
rather
than being wasteful.
For example
, in my town, each
house
is paid
a fee for every recyclable material collected and returned to the Recycling Agency. This practice
reduced
the rate of flooding in the area.

In conclusion
, I believe the responsibility to curtail the damage
being done
to the habitat involves The
Government
, Large Cooperations and
Man
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that to reduce traffic problem people will come from rural areas to live in urban areas. What extant v. 1

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