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talk about a popular actor, musician, or artist, whose works you do not admire. explain why. v.1

talk about a popular actor, musician, or artist, whose works you do not admire. explain why. v. 1
Is uniform life recommended for modern humans? Or do we have to change our lives every now and then? This question can be analysed in different aspects such as psychological and economic. If we accept that changes make a contribution to enhance the quality of life, the question should now be answered that what hinders change? Over the past decades, diverse difficulties have emerged from a human due to life uniformity, and the challenges can be categorized into two distinct bundles, individual and social predicaments which have detrimental consequences on the person and families. Depression and lack of motivation embody personal plights which establish enormous embargoes for prosperity. Then, such hardships have the innate potential to permeate and spread to people around us, and thereby lead to fade the family relationships. Thus, we have no choice but to produce a remedy to tackle the issue. A solution for the challenge is to accept that monotony and the tendency to uniformity is a predicament that requires a solution. When people came to believe, he or she should march to prevail it, which can be done in different ways. First, friends specifically amicable friends can cater contribution to get rid of this situation by their decent attitudes. Second, another effective way is to take a precise glance into the life of other prosperous individuals and try to grasp their positive points. Eventually, it is beneficial to accept the enormous challenges and make an endeavour to guard against them, in time and pecuniary standpoints. In conclusion, although alterations accompany difficulty and it is incontrovertible that inclination to uniformity is typical of humans, but we should be able to overcome subjective and objective hardships to make changes in our life.
Is uniform
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life
recommended for modern humans? Or do we
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have to
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change
our
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lives
every
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now
and then? This question can be
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analysed
in
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different
aspects such as psychological and economic. If we accept that
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changes
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make
a contribution to enhance the quality of
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life
, the question should
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now
be answered
that what hinders
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change
?

Over the past decades, diverse difficulties have emerged from a human due to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
uniformity, and the challenges can
be categorized
into two distinct bundles, individual and social predicaments which have detrimental consequences on the person and families. Depression and lack of motivation embody personal plights which establish enormous embargoes for prosperity. Then, such hardships have the innate potential to permeate and spread to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
around us, and thereby lead to fade the family relationships.
Thus
, we have no choice
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but
to produce a remedy to tackle the issue.

A solution for the challenge is to accept that monotony and the tendency to uniformity is a predicament that requires a solution. When
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
came to believe, he or she should march to prevail it, which can
be done
in
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different
ways.
First
, friends
specifically
amicable friends can cater contribution to
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get
rid of this situation by their decent attitudes. Second, another effective way is to take a precise glance into the
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life
of other prosperous individuals and try to grasp their
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
points.
Eventually
, it is beneficial to accept the enormous challenges and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
an
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endeavour
to guard against them, in time and pecuniary standpoints.

In conclusion
, although alterations accompany difficulty and it is incontrovertible that inclination to uniformity is typical of humans,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
we should be able to overcome subjective and objective hardships to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
in our
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life
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
One language sets you in a corridor for life. Two languages open every door along the way.
Frank Smith

IELTS essay talk about a popular actor, musician, or artist, whose works you do not admire. explain why. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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