Several minority languages have become extinct. Although I think that our communication will be easier if less languages exist in the world, I believe that there is a necessary to preserve all languages.
The language barrier may pose the risk of mis-communication in the important occasion. Mis-communication can possibly lead to wars and conflicts between countries. For instance, if translators are not capable of delivering accurate messages to leaders in the diplomatic conference, this could potentially alter the decision made by their leaders. Consequently, it may create an argument in the conference.
On the other hand, A language represents people's culture and heritage. It helps connect us to the past and people can understand their own history by learning the language. Learning a language is to educate individuals that they can have the better understanding of their history. Also, people can gain knowledge of a new language and develop a useful skill. As a result, they can increase their employability. Furthermore, people have the responsibility to preserve languages, especially minority languages. These languages enrich the cultural diversity in our modern world. This means that if many languages die out, several unique cultures will become extinct eventually.
In conclusion, I agree that fewer languages in the world make our life better. However, I firmly believe that every language should be preserved and pass it on to the next generation. Therefore, we can maintain our cultural diversity and the history.
Several minority
languages
have become extinct. Although I
think
that our communication will be easier if
less
languages
exist in the world, I believe that there is a necessary to preserve all languages.
The
language
barrier may pose the
risk
of
mis-communication
in the
important
occasion.
Mis-communication
can
possibly
lead to wars and conflicts between countries.
For instance
, if translators are not capable of delivering accurate messages to leaders in the diplomatic conference, this could
potentially
alter the decision made by their leaders.
Consequently
, it may create an argument in the conference.
On the other hand
, A
language
represents
people
's culture and heritage. It
helps
connect us to the past and
people
can understand their
own
history by learning the
language
. Learning a
language
is to educate individuals that they can have the better understanding of their history.
Also
,
people
can gain knowledge of a new
language
and develop a useful
skill
.
As a result
, they can increase their employability.
Furthermore
,
people
have the responsibility to preserve
languages
,
especially
minority
languages
. These
languages
enrich the cultural diversity in our modern world. This means that if
many
languages
die
out, several unique cultures will become extinct
eventually
.
In conclusion
, I
agree
that fewer
languages
in the world
make
our life better.
However
, I
firmly
believe that every
language
should
be preserved
and pass it on to the
next
generation.
Therefore
, we can maintain our cultural diversity and the history.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes