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Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is often considered as a bad quality for a person. However, some people think that is a good quality for a person v.2

Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is often considered as a bad quality for a person. However, some people think that is a good quality for a person v. 2
At the turn of the new century, there is no doubt that people encounter with catastrophic situations that they should make rational decisions and no one can turn a blind eye to the direct and indirect effects of these decisions on people’s future lives. Although some people adhere to this belief that taking a lot of time can be considered as a positive parameter for person’s personality, in my vantage point it is a negative element for a person’s characteristic since making immediate decisions reflects a person’s analytical ability, and also the person can grasp valuable opportunities. The first aspect to point out is that what provokes people to make quick decisions is showing their analytical ability. As a matter of fact, one of the rigors of modern hectic life is that people’s lives have a lot of ups and downs and people face with complicated situations that they need to cope with these problems as soon as possible. It is axiomatic that individuals can prove their analytical abilities in these critical situations. To illustrate more, take a case of a person who runs into a huge problem and he has a lot of financial concerns for instance. He should gather enough information, broaden his horizons and analyze the situations and then make a rational decision about how he can solve his problem. in this way, not only does he find best feet forward, but also he prove his ingenious manner to other people. Hence, making quick decision can be highly beneficial. The further subtle point is that seizing precious opportunities can be considered another remarkable advantage of making immediate decisions. It is absolutely undeniable, in the competitive world of today, people should grasp opportunities in order to make promising future for themselves. In this way, they need to be health-conscious because opportunities may vanish in a blink of an eye. In my own experience, last year my close friend introduced two companies which employed specialist computer programmer but I could not make quick decision; consequently, neither did I grasp opportunities, nor could I find decent job in my field. Had I had made immediate decision, I could gained a horde of money and revolutionized my life by working in prestigious company. Therefore, if a person cannot make decision quickly and in a short time, he will lose the best chances which may bring bright future for him. On the whole, according to above-mentioned points and ideas, it is crystal-clear that making quick decision can be considered as a significant merit’s of individuals since it reflects their analytical ability, and also they can seize opportunities. It is high time overlooking the fact that a person who has hard time for decision-making is a worthy person. Have you ever seen a prosperous person without analytical ability? Can you consider a person successful without grasping opportunities? I absolutely believe no!
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people
encounter with catastrophic
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that they should
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make
rational
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decisions
and no one can turn a blind eye to the direct and indirect effects of these
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decisions
on
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people’s
future
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people
adhere to this belief that taking
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time
can
be considered
as a
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positive
parameter for
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person’s
personality, in my vantage
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point
it is a
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negative
element for a
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person’s
characteristic since making immediate
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decisions
reflects a
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person’s
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analytical
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ability
, and
also
the
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person
can grasp valuable opportunities.

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first
aspect to
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point
out is that what provokes
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people
to
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make
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quick
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decisions
is showing their
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analytical
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ability
. As a matter of fact, one of the rigors of modern hectic life is that
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people’s
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lives
have
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a lot of
ups and downs and
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people
face with complicated
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situations
that they need to cope with these problems as
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soon
as possible. It is axiomatic that individuals can prove their
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analytical
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abilities
in these critical
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situations
. To illustrate more, take a case of a
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person
who runs into a huge
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problem and
he has
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a lot of
financial concerns
for instance
. He should gather
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enough
information, broaden his horizons and analyze the
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situations
and then
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make
a rational
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decision
about how he can solve his problem.
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find best
feet forward,
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also
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prove
his ingenious manner to other
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people
.
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, making
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quick
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decision
can be
highly
beneficial.

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further
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point
is that seizing precious
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opportunities
can
be considered
another remarkable advantage of making immediate
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decisions
. It is
absolutely
undeniable, in the competitive world of
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today
,
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people
should grasp
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opportunities
in order to
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make
promising future for themselves. In this way, they need to be health-conscious
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because
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opportunities
may vanish in a blink of an eye. In my
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own
experience, last year my close friend introduced two
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companies
which employed specialist computer programmer
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but
I could not
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make
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quick
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decision
;
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, neither did I grasp
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opportunities
, nor could I find decent job in my field. Had I had made immediate
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decision
, I could
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a horde of money and revolutionized my life by working in prestigious
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company
.
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person
cannot
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make
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decision
quickly
and in a short
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time
, he will lose the best chances which may bring bright future for him.

On the whole
, according to above-mentioned
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points
and
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ideas
, it is crystal-
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clear
that making
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quick
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decision
can
be considered
as a significant merit’s of individuals since it reflects their
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analytical
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ability
, and
also
they can seize
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opportunities
. It is high
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time
overlooking the fact that a
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person
who has
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hard
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time
for decision-making is a worthy
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person
. Have you ever
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seen
a prosperous
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person
without
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analytical
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ability
? Can you consider a
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person
successful without grasping
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opportunities
? I
absolutely
believe no!
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67Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Taking a lot of time to make an important decision is often considered as a bad quality for a person. However, some people think that is a good quality for a person v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
478 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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