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Symbiotic Relationships Symbiosis refers to an intimate relationship between two organisms. This term does not indicate whether the relationship is beneficial or harmful to the organisms involved. Mutual symbiosis, or mutualism, occurs when both species g v.1

Symbiotic Relationships Symbiosis refers to an intimate relationship between two organisms. This term does not indicate whether the relationship is beneficial or harmful to the organisms involved. Mutual symbiosis, or mutualism, occurs when both species g v. 1
The internet is a technology that has improved communication over time and has helped to improve people’s interaction in the past. This essay will discuss the advantage and disadvantages of net association. In recent years, the way people share the details with others has improved. The advantages of talking to others has been enhanced to the extent that messages get delivered real time. With this relief, anyone can sit in their comfort to chat with friends anywhere in the world and these ideas get distributed in milliseconds. On the other hand, the tool used in distributing information can be user friendly that is easy to use. One does not need to get stained with pen any longer. For example, I got a message same day from a friend that arrived Australia yesterday. The highlighted merits have made messaging distribution uncomplicated. Secondly, a few of the demerit can be alarming in such that discussing through the network can be insecure. Messages sent via the web is no longer safe, especially for delicate ones. Hackers can intrude people’s privacy and steal such vital details. The other hand, the low or medium class individuals might find it difficult to afford paying web subscription. Average earners will prefer to use the old fashion way of distributing information because of the high cost of internet facilities. For instance, a family friend that travelled to Nigeria last week is yet to send an arrival message to her family because of the high rate of cloud resources and low income. Conclusively, this essay discussed the advantage of internet being a relief to timely information distribution is key while its disadvantage can be a nightmare because of the message insecurity.
The internet is a technology that has
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improved
communication over time and has
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helped
to
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improve
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people
’s interaction in the past. This essay will discuss the advantage and disadvantages of net association.

In recent years, the way
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people
share the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
with others has
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improved
. The advantages of talking to others has
been enhanced
to the extent that
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messages
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
delivered real time. With this relief, anyone can sit in their comfort to chat with friends anywhere in the world and these
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
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get
distributed in milliseconds. On the
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other
hand, the tool
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in distributing information can be
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user friendly
that is
easy to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
. One does not need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
stained with pen any longer.
For example
, I
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got
a
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message
same day from a friend that arrived Australia yesterday. The highlighted merits have made messaging distribution uncomplicated.

Secondly
, a few of the demerit can be alarming in such that discussing through the network can be insecure.
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Messages
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sent
via the web is no longer safe,
especially
for delicate ones. Hackers can intrude
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
’s privacy and steal such vital
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details
. The
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other
hand, the low or medium
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class
individuals might find it difficult to afford
If 'afford' is used as a verb, it usually requires the infinitive: "to pay".
paying
web subscription. Average earners will prefer to
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use
the
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old
fashion way of distributing information
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because
of the high cost of internet facilities.
For instance
, a family friend that travelled to Nigeria last week is
yet
to
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send
an arrival
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message
to her family
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because
of the high rate of cloud resources and low income.

Conclusively
, this essay discussed the advantage of internet being a relief to timely information distribution is key while its disadvantage can be a nightmare
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because
of the
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message
insecurity.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Symbiotic Relationships Symbiosis refers to an intimate relationship between two organisms. This term does not indicate whether the relationship is beneficial or harmful to the organisms involved. Mutual symbiosis, or mutualism, occurs when both species g v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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