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An escarpment is an area of the Earth where elevation changes suddenly. Escarpment usually refers to the bottom of a cliff or a steep slope. (Scarp refers to the cliff itself. ). Escarpments separate two level land surfaces. For example, an escarpment coul v.1

An escarpment is an area of the Earth where elevation changes suddenly. Escarpment usually refers to the bottom of a cliff or a steep slope. (Scarp refers to the cliff itself. ). Escarpments separate two level land surfaces. For example, an escarpment coul v. 1
A better climate is required for the good life. Individuals can not do anything to improve the environment and only government and big organization able to make the difference is highly discussed issue in the world. This essay does not agree with this opinion, In my view everyone has their own responsibility to save the environment and should take proper actions. Firstly, The government should take proper action to save the environment by imposing some strict laws. Mining is one of the biggest reasons of the pollution. People do illegal mining from rivers which causes the environmental damage, therefore law enforcement bodies should enforce strict law to stop this, which can help to save the environment. Another essential point, Big organization should also impose an environment friendly policy as multiple people are associated with them. For example, One of the multinational company in India strictly ban to print paper in their company until it is very necessary to do so. These small steps can save thousand of trees to cut down, which result in saving the environment. On the other hand, People should also play their part to save the climate. Sometime small small step convert into big moment. To illustrate, People can look their surroundings and see what is going wrong there. For example, They can stop using poly bags and remember to take cloth bags from the house when they go out for shopping. To elaborate, last year some people group started an online campaign for less usage of poly bags and we all know how dangerous plastics are for the environment. And a result of this, Poly bag sales was down by 40 percent in a particular state. To conclude, Good environment is necessary for long and healthy life and government and large company as well as individuals both are responsible for saving the environment. Both should play their part to save this.
A better climate
is required
for the
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good
life. Individuals can not do anything to
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improve
the
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environment
and
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only
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government
and
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big
organization able to
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make
the difference is
highly
discussed issue in the world. This essay does not
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agree
with this opinion, In my view everyone has their
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own
responsibility to
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save
the
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environment
and should take proper actions.

Firstly
, The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should take proper action to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
save
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
by imposing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
strict laws. Mining is one of the biggest reasons of the pollution.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
People
do illegal mining from rivers which causes the environmental damage,
therefore
law enforcement bodies should enforce strict law to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
this, which can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
save
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
. Another essential point,
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Big
organization should
also
impose an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
friendly policy as multiple
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are associated
with them.
For example
, One of the multinational
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
in India
strictly
ban to print paper in their
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company
until it is
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very
necessary to do
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so
. These
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small
steps can
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save
Use "a thousand" or use a number before 'thousand'.
thousand
of trees to
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cut
down, which result in saving the environment.

On the other hand
,
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People
should
also
play their part to
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save
the climate. Sometime
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small
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small
step convert into
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big
moment. To illustrate,
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People
can look their surroundings and
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see
what is going
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wrong
there.
For example
, They can
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stop
using
poly
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bags
and remember to take cloth
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bags
from the
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house
when they go out for shopping. To elaborate, last year
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some
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people
group
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started
an online campaign for less usage of
poly
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
bags and
we all know how
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dangerous
plastics are for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
. And a result of this,
Poly
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bag
sales was down by 40 percent in a particular state.

To conclude
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
is necessary for long and healthy life and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
and large
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
as well
as individuals both are responsible for saving the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
. Both should play their part to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
save
this.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay An escarpment is an area of the Earth where elevation changes suddenly. Escarpment usually refers to the bottom of a cliff or a steep slope. (Scarp refers to the cliff itself. ). Escarpments separate two level land surfaces. For example, an escarpment coul v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
316 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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