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Students have to appear for too many exams these days. Actually periodic written and oral assessments have become an integral aspect of even primary education. In my opinion, exams are both good and bad. The merits and demerits of conducting a large numbe v.1

Students have to appear for too many exams these days. Actually periodic written and oral assessments have become an integral aspect of even primary education. In my opinion, exams are both good and bad. The merits and demerits of conducting a large numbe v. 1
In the modern era, technological advancement has left no stone unturned. Transportation facilities around the world have also benefited from such advancement. However, people have started using personal cars more instead of using public transportation. This essay would discuss the problems associated with the increased use of personal cars and how these could be reduced followed by a reasonable conclusion. In many developed countries, the mode of transportation is considered a status symbol in the society. People have started buying more and more cars without thinking about its detrimental effects on the environment. To start with, the rise in the number of vehicles on the roads has led to an increase in air pollution as the engines operate on petrol and diesel. For instance, recently in India the Air Quality Index rose to alarming levels due to air pollution caused by vehicles that have affected people of all age groups especially young children and elderly with respiratory problems and skin diseases. Moreover, it also affects people using public transport as traffic congestions result in wastage of valuable time. However, it is only fair to advise and encourage people to use public transport whenever possible rather than using personal cars daily. Governments around the globe have funded public transports to provide the best services to its citizens. Many air-conditioned trolleys and buses are employed, which run on electricity or CNG which do not pollute the environment. Car pooling methods are also promoted by governments and people, which also helps people to socialize and enjoy the comfort of personal cars as well. In real-time, people who carpool have the facility of driving in a different lane than regular lanes which saves time and also provides a better fuel economy. To conclude, if we want to save the environment for future generations, there must be a joint effort of government and people in discouraging the use of personal cars and encouraging various methods discussed above for better life quality and a healthier environment.
In the modern era, technological advancement has
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left
no stone unturned. Transportation facilities around the world have
also
benefited from such advancement.
However
,
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people
have
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started
using
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personal
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cars
more
instead
of using
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public
transportation. This essay would discuss the problems associated with the increased
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use
of
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personal
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cars
and how these could be
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reduced
followed by a reasonable conclusion.

In
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many
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developed countries
, the mode of transportation
is considered
a status symbol in the society.
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People
have
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started
buying more and more
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cars
without thinking about its detrimental effects on the
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environment
. To
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start
with, the rise in the number of vehicles on the roads has led to an increase in air pollution as the engines operate on petrol and diesel.
For instance
, recently in India the Air Quality Index rose to alarming levels due to air pollution caused by vehicles that have
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affected
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people
of all age groups
especially
young children and elderly with respiratory problems and skin diseases.
Moreover
, it
also
affects
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people
using
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public
transport as traffic congestions result in wastage of valuable time.

However
, it is
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only
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fair
to advise and encourage
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people
to
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use
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public
transport whenever possible
rather
than using
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personal
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cars
daily.
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Governments
around the globe have funded
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public
transports to provide the best services to its citizens.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
air-conditioned trolleys and buses
are employed
, which run on electricity or CNG which do not pollute the
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environment
.
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Car
pooling methods are
also
promoted by
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governments
and
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people
, which
also
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helps
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people
to socialize and enjoy the comfort of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
personal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
as well
. In real-time,
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people
who carpool have the facility of driving in a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
lane than regular lanes which saves time and
also
provides a better fuel economy.

To conclude
, if we want to save the
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environment
for future generations, there
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be a joint effort of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
in discouraging the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
personal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
and encouraging various methods discussed above for better life quality and a healthier
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Students have to appear for too many exams these days. Actually periodic written and oral assessments have become an integral aspect of even primary education. In my opinion, exams are both good and bad. The merits and demerits of conducting a large numbe v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
330 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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