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Students have to appear for too many exams these days. Actually periodic written and oral assessments have become an integral aspect of even primary education. In my opinion, exams are both good and bad. The merits and demerits of conducting a large numbe v.2

Students have to appear for too many exams these days. Actually periodic written and oral assessments have become an integral aspect of even primary education. In my opinion, exams are both good and bad. The merits and demerits of conducting a large numbe v. 2
The main advantage of conducting more examinations is that teachers can assess the subject knowledge and understanding of students in a more structured way. Exams, after all, are a time tested way of assessing a student’s intelligence and commitment to learning. What’s more, exams and grades act as a benchmark and facilitate the process of selection for higher studies. For example, students scoring above 85 percent in all modules in their final board exams alone can secure admission in top science colleges. Another benefit of conducting multiple tests is that it helps children to cope with the pressures of the real life. It is no secret that students who appear for periodic assessments are better at handling stressful situations. This quality will stand them in good stead when they enter the real world outside school. On the other hand, too many exams are more likely to increase the stress level of children and take a toll on their health. Comparison with fellow students and parental pressure to excel in each exam can further deteriorate children’s mental stability. For instance, some pupils are weak in certain subjects and they may consistently score low marks in those subjects. Their inability to improve their grades may hurt their confidence and cause further deterioration of their grades. In worst case scenarios exam pressure can trigger depression in academically poor students. To sum it up, conducting too many exams can definitely help examiners to assess children’s potential. It can also help children to brace themselves for the competition ahead. However, at the same time, the constant pressure of repetitive evaluations can be detrimental for some students, especially those who are weak in academics. It is important that parents and teachers work with them closely and provide them counseling if they need it.
The main advantage of conducting more examinations is that teachers can assess the subject knowledge and understanding of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
in a more structured way. Exams,
after all
, are a time
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tested
way of assessing a
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student’s
intelligence and commitment to learning. What’s more, exams and grades act as a benchmark and facilitate the process of selection for higher studies.
For example
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
scoring above 85 percent in all modules in their final board exams alone can secure admission in top science colleges.

Another benefit of conducting multiple
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tests
is that it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
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children
to cope with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pressures
of the real life. It is no secret that
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students
who appear for periodic assessments are better at handling stressful situations. This quality will stand them in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
stead when they enter the real world outside school.

On the other hand
, too
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many
exams are more likely to increase the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
level of
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children
and take a toll on their health. Comparison with fellow
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students
and parental
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pressure
to excel in each exam can
further
deteriorate
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children’s
mental stability.
For instance
,
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some
pupils are weak in certain
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subjects and
they may
consistently
score low marks in those subjects. Their inability to
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improve
their grades may hurt their confidence and cause
further
deterioration of their grades. In
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worst
case scenarios exam
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pressure
can trigger depression in
academically
poor students.

To sum it up, conducting too
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
exams can definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
examiners to assess
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children’s
potential. It can
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
to brace themselves for the competition ahead.
However
, at the same time, the constant
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pressure
of repetitive evaluations can be detrimental for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
,
especially
those who are weak in academics. It is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
that parents and teachers work with them
closely
and provide them counseling if they need it.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Students have to appear for too many exams these days. Actually periodic written and oral assessments have become an integral aspect of even primary education. In my opinion, exams are both good and bad. The merits and demerits of conducting a large numbe v. 2

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6.0
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