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Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources (such as the Internet and television). To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources (such as the Internet and television). v. 1
It is undeniable that students can learn a lot from the Internet and TV and these have become an indispensable part of education, but I believe that teachers play a more significant role in the classroom. I believe that no subject can be covered by explaining from the teacher. A number of arguments surround my mind. On the one hand, when students learn lessons from their own teachers, there are two main advantages. Firstly, getting information in the classroom will result in deep knowledge. The reason is that all the subjects would be reviewed and the overall issues might be explained more by the teacher. That is how exactly students would reach to comprehensive responses. Secondly, school and university students will enjoy the educational environment. They can interact in groups by attending their classmates. That is why their motivation will be highly raised. On the other hand, those who study through other sources such as the Internet or television, there are both merits and drawbacks. Since they do not have to worry much about their time by going to and returning from school or university, they are able to economize. As well as they benefit more opportunity planning for their future. However, studying at home via the Internet or television has some disadvantages. They are unable to focus on their own lessons because of disturbance from other family members. Although, when they are watching television or surfing the webs, they would be encountered by irrelevant subjects. To conclude, it can be said, that no doubt TV and the Internet are very educative these days, but students definitely learn more from the teacher.
It is undeniable that
students
can learn a lot from the Internet and TV and these have become an indispensable part of education,
but
I believe that
teachers
play a more significant role in the classroom. I believe that no subject can
be covered
by explaining from the
teacher
. A number of arguments surround my mind.

On the one hand, when
students
learn lessons from their
own
teachers
, there are two main advantages.
Firstly
, getting information in the classroom will result in deep knowledge. The reason is that all the subjects would
be reviewed
and the
overall
issues might be
explained
more by the
teacher
.
That is
how exactly
students
would reach to comprehensive responses.
Secondly
, school and university
students
will enjoy the educational environment. They can interact in groups by attending their classmates.
That is
why their motivation will be
highly
raised.

On the other hand
, those who study through other sources such as the Internet or television, there are both merits and drawbacks. Since they do not
have to
worry much about their time by going to and returning from school or university, they are able to economize.
As well
as they benefit more opportunity planning for their future.
However
, studying at home via the Internet or television has
some
disadvantages. They are unable to focus on their
own
lessons
because
of disturbance from other family members. Although, when they are watching television or surfing the webs, they would
be encountered
by irrelevant subjects.

To conclude
, it can
be said
, that no doubt TV and the Internet are
very
educative these days,
but
students
definitely learn more from the
teacher
.
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IELTS essay Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources (such as the Internet and television). v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
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