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Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or agree with this view? v.5

There are many artists who make works that impress a lot of people such as Leonardo da Vinci who made Mona Lisa. If they had not been supported by anyone, these famous works wouldn’t exist. As a fan of artists, I don’t agree with the view. In this essay, I will discuss these views from the standpoint of a person who loves arts and supports them. 

First of all, I have been to The National Gallery, London. There are a lot of people who came to look at the artwork. I realised that some people look forward to seeing these works of art and I didn’t know the artwork Besides artists are only able to pass on to our future generations what is happening in this era via their artwork. This is so important because it allows them to understand our way of life and history in the twenty first century through something that has impact and is meaningful. 

On the other hand, people who are not interested in the artwork and do not appreciate it. From people who cannot see the rue value of art, I can understand why they say that supporting artists and keeping quality of famous arts in a museum and university and so on are a wasting of money. 

To conclude, I think art is something that supports people’s hearts in every era, it truly has the power of changing someone’s life. Therefore, I believe that the government shouldn’t cut costs for arts and people who have negative opinions should be kind and cheer to artists.
There are
many
artists
who
make
works that impress
a lot of
people
such as Leonardo da Vinci
who
made Mona Lisa. If they had not
been supported
by anyone, these
famous
works wouldn’t exist. As a fan of
artists
, I don’t
agree
with the view. In this essay, I will discuss these views from the standpoint of a person
who
loves
arts
and supports them.



First of all
, I have been to The National Gallery, London. There are
a lot of
people
who
came to look at the
artwork
. I
realised
that
some
people
look forward to seeing these works of
art
and I didn’t know the
artwork
Besides
artists
are
only
able to pass on to our future generations what is happening in this era via their
artwork
. This is
so
important
because
it
allows
them to understand our way of life and history in the twenty
first
century through something that has impact and is meaningful.



On the other hand
,
people
who
are not interested in the
artwork
and do not appreciate it. From
people
who
cannot
see
the rue value of
art
, I can understand why they say that supporting
artists
and keeping quality of
famous
arts
in a museum and university and
so
on are a wasting of money.



To conclude
, I
think
art
is something that supports
people’s
hearts in every era, it
truly
has the power of changing someone’s life.
Therefore
, I believe that the
government
shouldn’t
cut
costs for
arts
and
people
who
have
negative
opinions should be kind and cheer to
artists
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
261 words
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