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Student Saini universities open have it was two places to live they may choose to live a University dominators they may choose to live in apartment in the community compare the advantages of living in universities housing with the advent of living in an a v.2

Student Saini universities open have it was two places to live they may choose to live a University dominators they may choose to live in apartment in the community compare the advantages of living in universities housing with the advent of living in an a v. 2
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university
standoff call the sum of the learners refer to
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live
in
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universities
Hall of Residence for in single
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room
while others
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prefer
to
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live
in society flats I referred to
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live
in a
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University
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rooms
I will portray the both side of you in the following segments

as compared to bygone Era
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students
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prefer
to study in
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university
instead
of call the sum of the learners referred to
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live
in
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universities
Hall of Residence foreign singer
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room
while others
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prefer
to
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live
in society flats I referred to
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live
in a
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University
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rooms
I will portray the both side of you in the following segments

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some
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people
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live
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and foremost
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some
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helps
them to
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make
more friends and
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get
a chance to stay with them
easily
moreover
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some
are
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very
any cable in nature I do not
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to
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live
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room
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live
with friends and do lots of fun all
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to
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live
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own
pros the Premier League
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students
which are
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very
serious about their
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acadamies
to
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live
in a single
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room
without any
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other
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just
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so
that they can concentrate on studies
instead
of focusing on the
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other
travel things
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because
in the hostess
mostly
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student
do parties at night which unbearable for them

As for my point of view I
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prefer
to
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live
in a
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University
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rooms
which gives me a chance to
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live
with Overseas
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student
and a chance to communicate them to know about their cultural which can enhance my knowledge about culture
also
and I can learn
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many
things from them such as I can
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improve
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skills
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got
a chance to
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make
friends from
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other
countries

Do we calculate everyone has their
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own
view I do not deny any of them
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but
I could you
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get
that living in a
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University
Hall of Residence give a person more opportunities as compared to
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other
one although both as their
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own
pros it all depends on a person choice
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0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
42Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS essay Student Saini universities open have it was two places to live they may choose to live a University dominators they may choose to live in apartment in the community compare the advantages of living in universities housing with the advent of living in an a v. 2

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
399 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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