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At universities often have a choice to place to live they may choose to live in university dominators or they may choose to live in apartment in the community compare the advantages of living in university housing with the of living in an apartment in the v.2

At universities often have a choice to place to live they may choose to live in university dominators or they may choose to live in apartment in the community compare the advantages of living in university housing with the of living in an apartment in the v. 2
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students
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prefer
to study in
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universities
instead
of call this sum of the learners
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have to
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leave
and
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Universities
Hall of Residence for a single
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room
while others
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prefer
to
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live
in society flats I
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prefer
to
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live
in a
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University
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rooms
I will portray are both side of
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used
in the following statements

There is a plethora of reasons that why
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some
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people
want to
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live
in a hollow president
first
and foremost
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some
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students
are
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boys and
they are not much aware about the surrounding areas due to this referred a part of this will
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help
them it
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make
more
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friends
and
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get
a chance to
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Shimla
with them is Lee
moreover
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some
are
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very
any cable in natural they do not
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use to
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live
in a single
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room
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only
have a happy to
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live
with
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friends
and do lots of fun all together.

On the
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other
side song that
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used
to
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live
in societies act which has its
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own
pros the previous to face with each
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other
serious about their academies and privacy
are referred
to
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live
in a single
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room
without any of the disturbance true that they can concentrate on studies
instead
of focusing on
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other
tribal things
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because
in the horses most
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students
do party at late night which are unbearable for them

Asphalt point of view I
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prefer
to
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live
in a
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University
from which
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gives
me a chance to
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live
with Overseas
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students
and a chance to
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give
me
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get
them and to know about their
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culture
with can enhance my knowledge about
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cultures
also
and I can
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so
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many
things from them such as I can
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improve
my communication
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skills
and I
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got
a chance to
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make
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friends
from
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other
countries

asphalt point of view I
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prefer
to
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live
in a
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University
from which
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gives
me a chance to
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live
with Overseas
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students
and a chance to
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give
me
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get
them and to know about their
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culture
with can enhance my knowledge about
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cultures
also
and I can
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so
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many
things from them such as I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
my communication
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
a chance to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
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friends
from
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other
countries I
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don&
#039; t want
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any any
of them that I cause
It seems you either mean "it is", "if it", "it" or there is a comma missing: "it, it".
it it
at leaving in a
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University
Hall of Residence
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give
a person more opportunities as compared to
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other
one although both has their
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own
close it all depends on the person choice or thinking
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
50Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay At universities often have a choice to place to live they may choose to live in university dominators or they may choose to live in apartment in the community compare the advantages of living in university housing with the of living in an apartment in the v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
411 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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