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art is considered an essential part of all culture the word however these days fever and we were people appreciate art and turn their focus of Science and technology and business why do you think that what could be done to encourage more people to take in v.2

art is considered an essential part of all culture the word however these days fever and we were people appreciate art and turn their focus of Science and technology and business why do you think that what could be done to encourage more people to take in v. 2
art is being essential part of life, stone age but nowadays people have much interest in Science and Technology because our people things about the future and every person 1 emphasize on business to secure their future. there are many reason why should have more interesting science because every people think about the future even they are younger adult photo think for create a bright and secure future they think that the business is very indispensable for human without money they do not sustain life. Art is it being essential part of life government should compulsory give permission on schools or colleges for discusses about the art with students. They must reach to artistic places which are regarding related to culture suggest Punjabi Haveli that time. In conclusion vishal the government should refer to public for Singh artistic place and the people do not forget the culture decide the business is also important for everyone but similarly culture is much important because it has create strong bonding of people with culture
art
is being essential part of life,
stone age
but
nowadays
people
have much interest in Science and Technology
because
our
people
things about the future and every person 1 emphasize on business to secure their future.

there
are
many
reason why should have more interesting science
because
every
people
think
about the future even they are younger adult photo
think
for create a bright and secure future they
think
that the business is
very
indispensable for human without money they do not sustain life.

Art is it being essential part of life
government
should compulsory give permission on schools or colleges for
discusses about the
art with students. They
must
reach to artistic places which are regarding related to
culture
suggest Punjabi
Haveli
that time.

In conclusion
vishal
the
government
should refer to public for Singh artistic place and the
people
do not forget the
culture
decide the business is
also
important
for everyone
but
similarly
culture
is much
important
because
it has
create
strong bonding of
people
with
culture
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay art is considered an essential part of all culture the word however these days fever and we were people appreciate art and turn their focus of Science and technology and business why do you think that what could be done to encourage more people to take in v. 2

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