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Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree. v.4

There are many common effective forms to convey a message or information such as oral communication and written communication. However, people highly recommend that spoken communication is more always intensely than the written method. My opinion disagrees that the oral announcement is more effective than written. In order to understand this point of view, we first need to delve deeper into the functions of spoken communication. A common disadvantage to verbal communication is the cultural differences between sender and receiver. These differences will arise from the individuals speaking different languages, inability to understand the other persons’ colloquial phrases or in basic terms. Secondly, the speaker can only speak to a limit of information at any given time, with the difference in culture, the audience can not be able to grasp and understand all the information spoken during the conversation. Scientific research found that people only remember 10% of what they hear. Besides that, written communication is having more opportunities to emphasize the importance of exchanging information. For example, in the business rep, businesses often rely on pie charts, numbers, figures, diagrams, documents, and statistics which are conveying ideas as in detail, and comprehensive as possible. The fact that oral communication is not suitable in business required high precision. Moreover, current messaging technology allows conveying information as rapidly as spoken communication. In summary, a group of people supposes that verbal communication is more important than written messages. In my opinion, I have reason to think that written communication should be more common.
There are
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many
common effective forms to convey a message or
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information
such as oral
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communication
and
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written
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communication
.
However
,
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people
highly
recommend that spoken
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communication
is more always
intensely
than the
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written
method. My opinion disagrees that the oral announcement is more effective than written.

In order to understand this point of view, we
first
need to delve deeper into the functions of spoken
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communication
. A common disadvantage to verbal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
is the cultural differences between sender and receiver. These differences will arise from the individuals speaking
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different
languages, inability to understand the other persons’ colloquial phrases or in basic terms.
Secondly
, the speaker can
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only
speak to a limit of
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information
at any
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given
time, with the difference in culture, the audience can not be able to grasp and understand all the
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information
spoken during the conversation. Scientific research found that
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people
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only
remember 10% of what they hear.

Besides
that,
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written
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
is having more opportunities to emphasize the importance of exchanging
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
.
For example
, in the business rep, businesses
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often
rely on pie charts, numbers, figures, diagrams, documents, and statistics which are conveying
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ideas
as in detail, and comprehensive as possible. The fact that oral
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communication
is not suitable in business required high precision.
Moreover
,
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current
messaging technology
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allows
conveying
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information
as
rapidly
as spoken communication.

In summary, a group of
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people
supposes that verbal
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communication
is more
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important
than
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written
messages. In my opinion, I have reason to
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think
that
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written
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
should be more common.
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IELTS essay Spoken communication is more always powerful than written communication.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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