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Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree. v.1

Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. v. 1
Some individuals opine that verbal communication is more essential than written communication. One can communicate in either ways which is convenient to them. In my opinion, it varies from individual to individual and sometimes it depends on the context which the matter is to be conveyed to other person. Analyzing both the inabilities, the two ways of communication is essential to transfer the information. On the one hand, spoken communication is necessary in few places. It is versatile that while speaking the other member can identify their emotions and even through facial expressions. For instance, an interview is conducted face to face round so that to understand the candidate's ability and their feelings. Despite, to this famous politicians and influences around the world give speeches to convey their thoughts. Thus spoken communication is essential for certain things, but it is not suitable for unpleasant messages. On the Flip side, written form of communication is necessary those who feel shy and lack of ability to convey the messages appropriately. Some masses cannot express their views orally, but their words speak volume about them. For example, a writer who pen down their ideas shakes the world by expressing their thoughts. However, it is told that pen is mighter than sword. Eventually, written communication is also suited to limited action of the society. To Summarise, just like the fingers of hand are not same, as well as no two persons are alike. So, from my opinion the both ways of communication has an equal importance. Hence, it is hard to say spoken communication is more powerful than written communication.
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individuals opine that verbal
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communication
is more essential than
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written
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communication
. One can communicate in either ways which is convenient to them. In my opinion, it varies from individual to individual and
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sometimes
it depends on the context which the matter is to
be conveyed
to other person. Analyzing both the inabilities, the two ways of
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communication
is essential to transfer the information.

On the one hand, spoken
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communication
is necessary in few places. It is versatile that while speaking the other member can identify their emotions and even through facial expressions.
For instance
, an interview
is conducted
face to face round
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so
that to understand the candidate's ability and their feelings. Despite, to this
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famous
politicians and influences around the world give speeches to convey their thoughts.
Thus
spoken
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communication
is essential for certain things,
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but
it is not suitable for unpleasant messages.

On the Flip side,
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written
form of
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communication
is necessary those who feel shy and lack of ability to convey the messages
appropriately
.
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Some
masses cannot express their views
orally
,
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but
their words speak volume about them.
For example
, a writer who pen down their
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ideas
shakes the world by expressing their thoughts.
However
, it is
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told
that pen is
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mighter
than sword.
Eventually
,
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written
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communication
is
also
suited to limited action of the society.

To
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Summarise
,
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just
like the fingers of hand are not same,
as well
as no two persons are alike.
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So
, from my opinion the both ways of
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communication
has an equal importance.
Hence
, it is
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hard
to say spoken
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communication
is more powerful than
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written
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communication
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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