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Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. to what extent do you agree or disagree v.2

Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. v. 2
This issue of how to share your thoughts and emotions with other people by having a conversation or communicate through emails or letters has come much more discussed topic these days; however a agree with those who say that verbal part is the most important. In the following paragraphs I will explore the rationale for the both beliefs as well as proffer justification for my own viewpoint. Regarding those who hold that writing is the key between person communication, there are many reasons why not. One supportive claim that writing takes more time and effort to explain your thoughts and ideas, moreover it requires particular skills to write in an excellent manner, which is very difficult especially these days. More specifically, if you write a letter you need to use a high level vocabulary and you have to use it correctly, and after all you need to check everything for mistakes, so it is a very labour-intensive process. Nevertheless, I firmly believe that it is less challenging for the person to describe everything in words. The obvious reason is that when you speak, you use all parts of your body, all emotions and it is easy for the person to understand you. My close friend is a shining example of spoken communication he works as a sales manager so it is his job to persuade people to buy something, not only his ability to use his body in conversations with clients helps him to perform better, but also his unbelievable emotions sense of humour. In sum, I maintain that verbal ability is and will be the most important thing in a road of communication between each other. In the future, I sincerely wish that people will continue to talk.
This issue of how to share your thoughts and emotions with other
people
by having a conversation or communicate through emails or letters has
come
much more discussed topic these days;
however
a
agree
with those who say that verbal part is the most
important
. In the following paragraphs I will explore the rationale for the both beliefs
as well as
proffer justification for my
own
viewpoint.

Regarding those who hold that writing is the key between person communication, there are
many
reasons why not. One supportive claim that writing takes more time and effort to
explain
your thoughts and
ideas
,
moreover
it requires particular
skills
to write
in an excellent manner
, which is
very
difficult
especially
these days. More
specifically
, if you write a letter you need to
use
a high level vocabulary and you
have to
use
it
correctly
, and
after all
you need to
check
everything for mistakes,
so
it is a
very
labour-intensive
process.

Nevertheless
, I
firmly
believe that it is less challenging for the person to
describe
everything in words. The obvious reason is that when you speak, you
use
all parts of your body, all emotions and it is easy for the person to understand you. My close friend is a shining example of spoken communication he works as a sales manager
so
it is his job to persuade
people
to
buy
something, not
only
his ability to
use
his body in conversations with clients
helps
him to perform better,
but
also
his unbelievable emotions sense of
humour
.

In sum, I maintain that verbal ability is and will be the most
important
thing in a road of communication between each other. In the future, I
sincerely
wish that
people
will continue to talk.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
289 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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