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Speaking topic in text: 1. How do most people travel to work where you live? 2. What traffic problems are there in your area? 3. How do traffic problems affect you? 4. How would you reduce the traffic problems in your area? Speaking recording: v.1

Speaking topic in text: 1. How do most people travel to work where you live? 2. What traffic problems are there in your area? 3. How do traffic problems affect you? 4. How would you reduce the traffic problems in your area? Speaking recording: v. 1
It is considered by some that books are becoming less popular as a means of information and entertainment. In my opinion, the advent of modern technology is gradually replacing the role of books to provide knowledge and entertainment due to its speed and flexibility. Firstly, the internet facilitates the fastest access to any kind of information. For example, people used to visit libraries and skim many different types of books, when they wanted to seek any information they needed. Nevertheless, now that most people have easy access to the internet, they are able to find the needed materials in a second by merely googling the right keywords and clicking a mouse. Secondly, the internet has a wider range of informative materials. Apart from, an array of books being available online, the internet also provides its users with multitudinous magazine articles, the most recent news, and blog posts. Moreover, internet users also experience the opportunity of accessing instructional videos on every subject, which is a more convenient method of studying for auditory learners. Finally, Cutting-edge technology is also making books lose their importance in terms of entertainment. Thus, according to many survey results, an array of people mentioned the internet as the main reason not to read novels. As the books do not contain auditory or visual information, they turn to films to be able to see the appearance of fictional characters or listen to their voice. Furthermore, they can also play different video games in which they control those characters and struggle with enemies using a joystick. In conclusion, I would have to say that the number of people reading books has considerably fallen since alternative online methods to substitute them were introduced. Due to faster access and wider selections facilitated by the internet, books are likely to become less popular in the future.
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books
are becoming less popular as a means of
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information
and entertainment. In my opinion, the advent of modern technology is
gradually
replacing the role of
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books
to provide knowledge and entertainment due to its speed and flexibility.

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, the internet facilitates the fastest access to any kind of
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information
.
For example
,
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people
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used
to visit libraries and skim
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many
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different
types of
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books
, when they wanted to seek any
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information
they needed.
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,
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now
that most
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people
have easy access to the internet, they are able to find the needed materials in a second by
merely
googling the right keywords and clicking a mouse.

Secondly
, the internet has a wider range of informative materials. Apart from, an array of
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books
being available online, the internet
also
provides its users with multitudinous magazine articles, the most recent news, and blog posts.
Moreover
, internet users
also
experience the opportunity of accessing instructional videos on every subject, which is a more convenient method of studying for auditory learners.

Finally
, Cutting-edge technology is
also
making
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books
lose their importance in terms of entertainment.
Thus
, according to
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many
survey results, an array of
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people
mentioned the internet as the main reason not to read novels. As the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
do not contain auditory or visual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
, they turn to films to be able to
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see
the appearance of fictional characters or listen to their voice.
Furthermore
, they can
also
play
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different
video games in which they control those characters and struggle with enemies using a joystick.

In conclusion
, I would
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have to
say that the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
reading
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books
has
considerably
fallen since alternative online methods to substitute them
were introduced
. Due to faster access and wider selections facilitated by the internet,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
are likely to become less popular in the future.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Speaking topic in text: 1. How do most people travel to work where you live? 2. What traffic problems are there in your area? 3. How do traffic problems affect you? 4. How would you reduce the traffic problems in your area? Speaking recording: v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
304 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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