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Most of the people send text messages rather than calling. Explain the reasons for it. Do you think sending text message is an advantage or disadvantage? v.2

Most of the people send text messages rather than calling. Explain the reasons for it. Do you think sending text message is an advantage or disadvantage? v. 2
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that most of the people send text messages rather than calling. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concerns in person's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay. There are a number of arguments in favour of stance. The most preponderant sending a text message rather than call can not only contribute to save time in a busy life but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives with much ease, efficacy, and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand in good stead as far as augmenting their chances for prosperity and excellence are concerned. There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of sending a text message than call. The primary one stems from the fact that by observing its aforementioned trend, academics have not only realized it gravity, but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussions when it comes to today's ever-changing lifestyle. Besides, its impacts on society is far-reaching indeed. Hence, it is apparent that why many people are against the ceiling. In view of the arguments outlined above, i can conclude that despite having some drawbacks of selling the benefits of sending wording messages are too great to ignore.
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today
's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of
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people
believing that most of the
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people
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send
text
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messages
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only
lead to myriad of concerns in person's life.
However
, I do not
entirely
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explain
why in this essay.

There are a number of arguments in
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favour
of stance. The most preponderant sending a text
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message
rather
than call can not
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only
contribute to save time in a busy life
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but
also
lead to numerous other
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benefits
in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not
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only
can
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benefit
more when it
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comes
to being effective,
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but
they can
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enhance the productivity and quality of their
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lives
with much
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ease
, efficacy, and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand in
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good
stead as far as augmenting their chances for prosperity and excellence
are concerned
.

There are,
however
,
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some
pitfalls that can
easily
overwhelm the potential
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benefits
of sending a text
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message
than call. The primary one stems from the fact that by observing its aforementioned trend, academics have not
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only
realized it gravity,
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but
also
gauged the magnitude of its repercussions when it
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comes
to
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today
's ever-changing lifestyle.
Besides
, its impacts on society is far-reaching
indeed
.
Hence
, it is apparent that why
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many
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people
are against the ceiling.

In view of the arguments outlined above,
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i
can conclude that despite having
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some
drawbacks of selling the
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benefits
of sending wording
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messages
are too great to
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ignore
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay Most of the people send text messages rather than calling. Explain the reasons for it. Do you think sending text message is an advantage or disadvantage? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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