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Someone suggests school to cut the Recycling Do you agree or disagree with this suggestion explain why v.1

Someone suggests school to cut the Recycling with this suggestion explain why v. 1
Waves are used to produce the electricity in specified model. Energy can be produced by using an Input Source just as Wind, Water or Wave. Wind Energy has been widely used since the 1980s and is evident by the increase in the number of Windmills across the world. Lately, Researchers have shown that a Wave-energy Machine can be three times more effective than a Wind Energy engine. On the spot, the design of the wave energy The instrument may appear complex, after all the description of its inner workings detailed below will help a Reader understand it better. As the name suggests, Wave Energy device depends on Wave as its Input Source. With the wave energy machine installed on the seabed, the wave direction is taken into consideration. As the water levels rise, the chambers located in the Wave-energy machine push the airflow upwards. Through the Air Duct located at the top, yet the air is pushed towards the Turbines, that increased airflow pressure causes the Turbines to rotate. The rotating turbines generate electricity, which is in turn passed through the top Chamber to the Output Source. The Location of the Wave Energy Machine plays a significant role in the amount of Energy that produced by waves. Larger waves produce a high output, whereas small waves produce low Output. It seems obvious, to install Wave-energy machines in areas where there are large waves. But larger waves have been too much expensive compared to small waves An important point to consider, though, is that Wave-Energy Machine Installation in areas with high waves incur high installation costs. So selecting suitable locations for Installation needs a thorough cost-benefit analysis up front. To conclude, a Wave-Energy Machine Installed at Suitable Locations and designed well can be extremely beneficial in generating high energy.
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Waves
are
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used
to produce the electricity in specified model.
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Energy
can
be produced
by using an Input Source
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just
as Wind, Water or
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Wave
. Wind
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Energy
has been
widely
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used
since the 1980s and is evident by the increase in the number of Windmills across the world. Lately, Researchers have shown that a Wave-energy
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Machine
can be three times more effective than a Wind
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Energy
engine. On the spot, the design of the
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wave
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energy


The instrument may appear complex,
after all
the description of its inner workings detailed below will
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help
a Reader understand it better.

As the name suggests,
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Wave
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Energy
device depends on
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Wave
as its Input Source. With the
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wave
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energy
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machine
installed on the seabed, the
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wave
direction
is taken
into consideration. As the water levels rise, the chambers located in the Wave-energy
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machine
push the airflow upwards. Through the Air Duct located at the top,
yet
the air
is pushed
towards the Turbines, that increased airflow pressure causes the Turbines to rotate. The rotating turbines generate electricity, which is in turn passed through the top Chamber to the Output Source.

The Location of the
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Wave
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Energy
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Machine
plays a significant role in the amount of
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Energy
that produced by
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waves
. Larger
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waves
produce a
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high
output, whereas
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small
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waves
produce low Output. It seems obvious, to install Wave-energy
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machines
in areas where there are large
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waves
.
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But
larger
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waves
have been too much expensive compared to
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small
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waves
An
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important
point to consider, though, is that Wave-Energy
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Machine
Installation in areas with
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high
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waves
incur
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high
installation costs.
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So
selecting suitable locations for Installation needs a thorough cost-benefit analysis up front.

To conclude
, a Wave-Energy
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Machine
Installed at Suitable Locations and designed well can be
extremely
beneficial in generating
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high
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energy
.
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34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Someone suggests school to cut the Recycling with this suggestion explain why v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
298 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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