Deciding where to live is one of the most difficult choices in life. Rising economy levels resulted in expanding urban areas and the younger population leaving the countryside. This has caused social problems ant the government should take measures to tackle this case.
First and foremost, massive migration to cities and towns caused immense difficulties in relationships between the adolescents and the seniors. For instance, an elder who is not capable of using state-of-the-art technologies was forced to move with his offsprings who were looking for a lucrative position at one of the town's companies. Seniors are not able to fully take care of themselves, therefore they are either forgotten and visited only occasionally or unwillingly torn from their home.
This situation can be solved with meddle of the government. As youngsters are in search of a prosperous job, various local companies, encouraged by the government, could open new factories in rural areas. This would bring benefits for both sides: workforce for the businesses and vacancies for the local dwellers. Moreover, the government ought to offer welfares for the ones willing to start their own business in the countryside. By doing this, the younger part of the population will be attracted to move to villages.
To sum everything up, the countryside becomes less and less populated with young people. This causes problems for the elderly and social relations between generations. The government must take action to prevent this situation from getting adverse. Otherwise, cities will become overcrowded and most of the citizens remain unemployed. 
Deciding where to  
live
 is one of the most difficult choices in life. Rising economy levels resulted in expanding urban areas and the younger population leaving the countryside. This has caused social problems ant the  
government
 should take measures to tackle this case. 
First
 and foremost, massive migration to cities and towns caused immense difficulties in relationships between the adolescents and the seniors.  
For instance
, an elder who is not capable of using state-of-the-art technologies  
was forced
 to  
move
 with his  
offsprings
 who were looking for a lucrative position at one of the town's  
companies
. Seniors are not able to  
fully
 take care of themselves,  
therefore
 they are either forgotten and visited  
only
  occasionally
 or  
unwillingly
 torn from their home.
This situation can  
be solved
 with meddle of the  
government
. As youngsters are in search of a prosperous job, various local  
companies
, encouraged by the  
government
, could open new factories in rural areas. This would bring benefits for both sides: workforce for the businesses and vacancies for the local dwellers.  
Moreover
, the  
government
 ought to offer  
welfares
 for the ones willing to  
start
 their  
own
 business in the countryside. By doing this, the younger part of the population will  
be attracted
 to  
move
 to villages.
To sum everything up, the countryside becomes less and less populated with young  
people
. This causes problems for the elderly and social relations between generations. The  
government
  must
 take action to  
prevent
 this situation from getting adverse.  
Otherwise
, cities will become overcrowded and most of the citizens remain unemployed. 
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