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Nowadays, there is a trend of learning through distance mode of education. Why people do prefer such mode of education? And what challenges are involved in it? v.1

Nowadays, there is a trend of learning through distance mode of education. Why people do prefer such mode of education? And what challenges are involved in it? v. 1
In the era of technology, the trend of distance learning is booming across the globe. Every change has certain reasons, so the distance mode of education is no more an exception. But this tendency has also some problems for learners which I will discuss in my following paragraphs. The distinct feature of distance learning is that it facilitates a learner to learn from anywhere at his/her convenience and this is the reason why many more learners are fascinated to get enrolled in such programs. Moreover, it has proven a blessing for working people around the world. Working professionals wish to earn professional degrees for many reasons like getting a promotion, updating skills and satiating thirst for knowledge and to name a few. Many a times they are unable to gain such professional certificates due to workload or lack of time flexibility in regular educational programs offered by universities. But they can make their dream true by studying through open universities. There can be no two opinions for the popularity of distance learning education, however it has certain challenges also. The first and foremost obstacle for learners can be the lack of guidance. In such learning programs, students do not need to attend regular lectures so their queries remain unsolved. Apart from that, many students left their course incomplete as they are not timely motivated as they are not in direct touch with their tutors. As per the latest survey conducted, there is a wide gulf between the numbers of students registered with open universities and the numbers of students out of them completed their degrees successfully. In short, because of time flexibility and other reasons, mostly working people are interested in joining distance learning programs, but the challenges involved in it is also a matter concern. (293 words)
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mode of education is no more an exception.
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also
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some
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which I will discuss in my following paragraphs.

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distance
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learning
is that it facilitates a
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learner
to learn from anywhere at his/her convenience and this is the
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reason
why
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more
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learners
are fascinated
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programs
.
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people
around the world. Working professionals wish to earn professional degrees for
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many
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reasons
like getting a promotion, updating
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skills
and satiating thirst for knowledge and to name a few.
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they are unable to gain such professional certificates due to workload or lack of time flexibility in regular educational
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programs
offered by universities.
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they can
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make
their dream true by studying through open universities.

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distance
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learning
education,
however
it has certain challenges
also
. The
first
and foremost obstacle for
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learners
can be the lack of guidance. In such
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learning
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programs
,
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students
do not need to attend regular lectures
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so
their queries remain unsolved. Apart from that,
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many
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students
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left
their course incomplete as they are not timely motivated as they are not in direct touch with their tutors. As per the latest survey conducted, there is a wide gulf between the numbers of
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students
registered with open universities and the numbers of
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students
out of them completed their degrees
successfully
.

In short,
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because
of time flexibility and other
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reasons
,
mostly
working
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people
are interested
in joining
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distance
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learning
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programs
,
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but
the challenges involved in it is
also
a matter concern.

(293 words)
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Nowadays, there is a trend of learning through distance mode of education. Why people do prefer such mode of education? And what challenges are involved in it? v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
297 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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