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Some university teachers prefer to record their lectures in advance so that students can familiarize themselves with the material before class Then teachers can use the class time to help students to practice what they learned while watching or listening v.1

Some university teachers prefer to record their lectures in advance so that students can familiarize themselves with the material before class Then teachers can use the class time to help students to practice what they learned while watching or listening v. 1
Teachers play a significant role in every ones life they constantly support and teach people with the knowledge they have. They are the building blocks for children as they tend to grow. However, In the modern society teachers are getting reduced due to varied reasons, resulting a huge impact on society. In this essay, I will discuss the main reasons why less people are showing interest in this profession and challenges to overcome the issue. First and important reason why teaching is ignored is constant work pressure and long working hours. Teachers often work till evenings teaching and controlling children in schools and they do not get enough time to spend with their family. For Example, private school teachers attend classes one after the other without a break in between. The School administration should consider their effort and should have to allocate periods such that they get enough time to relax. Secondly, they are paid very low compared to other professions. Let us take India, where a software engineer earns four times the amount earned by secondary staff. Teachers have huge respect in the world for their determination and contribution to the task, and hence they should be paid considering their importance. Finally, many people are going to work in the field they have studied. What I mean by this is everyone looks for a job that is related to their field of study ignoring fields like teaching and law. Most of the students when they were asked about their career, they even does not think about becoming a good teacher to pupils. Governments should encourage people to this profession by increasing giving trainings to youth and ensuring their career. All things considered, It is very difficult to teach people about skills with continuous learning. Teachers and books are always good resources for children to increase their ability. In my opinion, there are many challenges like stress due to working hours and low payroll, which should be encountered by monitoring schools and encouraging people to opt this job.
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Teachers
play a significant role in every ones life they
constantly
support and teach
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people
with the knowledge they have. They are the building blocks for children as they tend to grow.
However
, In the modern society
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teachers
are getting
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reduced
due to varied reasons, resulting a huge impact on society. In this essay, I will discuss the main reasons why
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less
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people
are showing interest in this profession and challenges to overcome the issue.

First
and
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important
reason why teaching is
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ignored
is constant work pressure and long working hours.
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Teachers
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often
work till evenings teaching and controlling children in
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schools and
they do not
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get
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enough
time to spend with their family.
For Example
, private
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school
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teachers
attend classes one after the other without a break in between. The
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School
administration should consider their effort and should
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have to
allocate periods such that they
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get
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enough
time to relax.

Secondly
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are paid
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very
low compared to other professions.
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Let
us take India, where a software engineer earns four times the amount earned by secondary staff.
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Teachers
have huge respect in the world for their determination and contribution to the task, and
hence
they should
be paid
considering their importance.

Finally
,
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many
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people
are going to work in the field they have studied. What I mean by this is everyone looks for a job that
is related
to their field of study ignoring fields like teaching and law. Most of the students when they
were asked
about their career, they even
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does
not
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think
about becoming a
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good
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teacher
to pupils.
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Governments
should encourage
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people
to this profession by increasing giving trainings to youth and ensuring their career.

All things considered, It is
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very
difficult to teach
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people
about
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skills
with continuous learning.
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Teachers
and books are always
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good
resources for children to increase their ability. In my opinion, there are
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many
challenges like
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stress
due to working hours and low payroll, which should
be encountered
by monitoring
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schools
and encouraging
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people
to opt this job.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some university teachers prefer to record their lectures in advance so that students can familiarize themselves with the material before class Then teachers can use the class time to help students to practice what they learned while watching or listening v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
338 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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