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4-1- Describe a skill you are good at. Explain why this skill is important to you. Out of the many skills that I have, I can say I'm particularly good at listening. It may sound trivial, but real listening is a skill that takes time to practice an v.1

4-1- Describe a skill you are good at. Explain why this skill is important to you. Out of the many skills that I have, I can say I'm particularly good at listening. It may sound trivial, but real listening is a skill that takes time to practice an v. 1
According to some people, watching movies is a waste of time. I strongly disagree with this opinion as movies can be very informative. Movies are considered as one of the most popular forms of entertainment and relaxation suitable for all age groups of society. To begin with, movies can be educational and inspirational rather than just a waste of time. Apart from entertainment, there are many movies that are based on current social and environmental issues, extraordinary achievement of individuals and major historic events. Such movies motivate ordinary people and have a huge impact on the society as well. For example, the movie, Three Idiots, challenged the traditional form of education system stressed upon the idea of learning by doing instead of just cramming the books. As a result, many public schools made changes in their school curriculum to provide education in an innovative and creative way. Therefore, watching movies helps individuals to learn important lessons from them along with entertainment. Another reason why watching movies is not a waste of time is that movies are the best form of entertainment and relaxation. At the present moment, most of the people are living a stressful and hectic life. Watching movies facilitates to relieve this stress to some extent and helps people to think or work with a relaxed mind. Furthermore, it provides people a great opportunity to spend quality time with their loved ones. Schools and colleges organize special trips to cinemas from time to time for their students to provide them a break from their busy study schedules. Hence, watching movies provides opportunities for social interaction and is a good activity to rejuvenate oneself. In conclusion, some people may vary in their views, but I think that watching movies is a useful activity as it provides education with entertainment.
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can be educational and inspirational
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time
. Apart from entertainment, there are
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many
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that
are based
on
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current
social and environmental issues, extraordinary achievement of individuals and major historic
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events
. Such
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movies
motivate ordinary
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people
and have a huge impact on the society
as well
.
For example
, the
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movie
, Three Idiots, challenged the traditional form of education system
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stressed
upon the
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idea
of learning by doing
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cramming the books.
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many
public schools made
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changes
in their school curriculum to
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education in an innovative and creative way.
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individuals to learn
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important
lessons from them along with entertainment.

Another reason why watching
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is not a waste of
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time
is that
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movies
are the best form of entertainment and relaxation. At the present moment, most of the
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people
are living a stressful and hectic life. Watching
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movies
facilitates to relieve this
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stress
to
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extent and
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or work with a relaxed mind.
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a great opportunity to spend quality
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with their
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ones. Schools and colleges organize special trips to cinemas from
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to
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for their students to
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provide
them a break from their busy study schedules.
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, watching
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movies
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provides
opportunities for social interaction and is a
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good
activity to rejuvenate oneself.

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,
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may vary in their views,
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think
that watching
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is a useful activity as it
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education with entertainment.
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IELTS essay 4-1- Describe a skill you are good at. Explain why this skill is important to you. Out of the many skills that I have, I can say I'm particularly good at listening. It may sound trivial, but real listening is a skill that takes time to practice an v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
300 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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