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Some university teachers prefer to record their lectures before classes. In this way, students will be familiar with the lecture in advance and teachers help students practice in classes while they are watching or listening lectures. Do you think it is an v.2

Some university teachers prefer to record their lectures before classes. In this way, students will be familiar with the lecture in advance and teachers help students practice in classes while they are watching or listening lectures. Do you think it is an v. 2
The quality of the college education, in some ways, determines the future of a nation and everyone pays a close attention on it. In university, some professors prefer to introduce the topic in the class and then teach students about it in details. However, some other professors tend to record their lecture before class, and give students a chance to learn about it by themselves first. From my perspective, I believe that the latter choice would be more effective way for university education. Knowing the topic before classes and preparing for it, students might have more possibilities and opportunities to train their self learning ability. Before classes, students would have to gather the information about the topic, which will be discussed in classes, and link their own knowledge to the topic. For example, when I was in the college, my advanced math teachers always give us his recorded lecture before classes and asked us to prepare for it. At first, I find it extreme hard for me, for I did not know how to find the information I would need for the next class and what the relationship between this topic and my own knowledge. However, things had changed after a semester, I gradually formed my own self learning style and when I comes troubles when studying, I have a clear mind about how and where I could find the answers. So, without my math teachers, I will never own my ability to learn by my self. Besides students, teachers will be benefits from this teaching styles, making full use to time in classes. After giving recorded lecture and asking students prepare for it, teachers will not have to introduce some important but can be easily learned by oneself information during class, thus, they can make full use of time during classes. For a student major in physics, after preparing for the class, he would already understand the importance and historic background of the physics, as a result, during the class, he or her teachers could devoted themselves to teaching students about the important theories of physics and how we can adopt it to the betterment of our society. Also, the precious time during classes could be taken by teachers and students to discussed about more meaningful topics. Therefore, teachers will not have to prepare too much about those unimportant information. In a words, the recorded lecture should be given to students before students in order to given them the chance to learn by themselves, and to make full use of time during the classes.
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some
professors prefer to introduce the
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about it in
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other professors tend to record their
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, and give
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a chance to learn about it by themselves
first
. From my perspective, I believe that the latter choice would be more effective way for university education.

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and preparing for it,
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might have more possibilities and opportunities to train their self learning ability.
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and asked us to prepare for it. At
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for me, for I did not know how to find the information I would need for the
next
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and what the relationship between this
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knowledge.
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formed my
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self learning style and when I
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mind about how and where I could find the answers.
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my ability to learn by my self.

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will be benefits from this teaching styles, making full
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theories of physics and how we can adopt it to the betterment of our society.
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45Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some university teachers prefer to record their lectures before classes. In this way, students will be familiar with the lecture in advance and teachers help students practice in classes while they are watching or listening lectures. Do you think it is an v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
425 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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