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Some universities are very large and have several thousand students. Others are small and have only a few thousand students. Which size of university do you think is better for students, why? Include details and examples in your explanation. v.1

Some universities are very large and have several thousand students. Others are small and have only a few thousand students. Which size of university do you think is better for students, why? Include details and examples in your explanation. v. 1
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.
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waste
management system can resolve this
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extent

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many
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companies
tend to manufacture
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products
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added
to the environment as garbage causing much detrimental importance to the
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environment


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is required
to manufacture these kinds of disposable
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product
to simplify human
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lives
. There should be a proper method implemented to dispose and recycle these
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products
. If one can
properly
dispose their
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waste
, it is easy to classify them and recycle them to manufacture other
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products
without having any
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issues
.
For instance
, India has built a road by using disposable plastic bottles. They have converted the garbage into
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some
other material and
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use
those to build the entire road which can be one of the best solutions to the garbage problem in the
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world


In conclusion
, an increasing number of places, facing
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issues
with the amount of
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waste
in their areas. Usage of disposable
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product
considered to be the main reason for this implementation of proper
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waste
management and recycling is the best solution to overcome this
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issue
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some universities are very large and have several thousand students. Others are small and have only a few thousand students. Which size of university do you think is better for students, why? Include details and examples in your explanation. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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