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Some teachers prefer announcing their quizzes in advance, while others prefer to give surprise quizzes. Talk about the advantages and disadvantages of surprise quizzes. use details and examples in your answers. v.1

Some teachers prefer announcing their quizzes in advance, while others prefer to give surprise quizzes. Talk about the advantages and disadvantages of surprise quizzes. use details and examples in your answers. v. 1
It is often argued that education is required to live our life better. Some people might think that it is significant to learn their home country’s literature rather than studying other nation’s subjects. Although focusing on their own country is necessary, I strongly disagree with this opinion. This essay will address the perspective of studying literature. First of all, the globalization in modern society. In other words, all people around the world live the global community because they are able to interact to other country’s inhabitants constantly, so learning own nation’s subjects might look old-fashioned. For example, when students do not concentrate on the international literature, they are isolated globally because communicating to different countries would be a good chance to know their traditional studying which is the good way to be knowledgeable. Therefore, young people nowadays might not focus on the outdated education. Moreover, in spite of the fact that learning home country is needed it is good to study abroad for career. When people study other nation’s subjects they might have a variety of opportunities to have a job internationally. For instance, students study abroad, they would have a chance to experience the other country’s culture which is useful and helpful when they interview for job because they are so experienced through studying abroad. Furthermore, abroad experiences might help their career to have jobs. In conclusion, traditional education might need when it comes to studying own culture’s subjects but we need to encourage people to educate international studying because it is more useful than home country’s literature. Also it will be effective to approach other nation’s culture for their future life so they should prepare it in advance.
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often
argued that education
is required
to
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live
our life better.
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people
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might
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think
that it is significant to learn their home
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country’s
literature
rather
than
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studying
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other
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nation’s
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subjects
. Although focusing on their
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own
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country
is necessary, I
strongly
disagree with this opinion. This essay will address the perspective of
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studying
literature.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, the globalization in modern society. In
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other
words, all
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people
around the world
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live
the global community
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because
they are able to interact to
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other
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country’s
inhabitants
constantly
,
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so
learning
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own
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nation’s
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subjects
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might
look
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old
-fashioned.
For example
, when students do not concentrate on the international literature, they
are isolated
globally
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because
communicating to
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different
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countries
would be a
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good
chance to know their traditional
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studying
which is the
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good
way to be knowledgeable.
Therefore
, young
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people
nowadays
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might
not focus on the outdated education.

Moreover
,
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in spite of
the fact that learning home
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country
is needed
it is
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good
to study
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abroad
for career.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
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people
study
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other
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nation’s
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subjects
they
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might
have a variety of opportunities to have a job
internationally
.
For instance
, students study
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abroad
, they would have a chance to experience the
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other
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country’s
culture which is useful and helpful when they interview for job
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because
they are
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so
experienced through
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studying
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abroad
.
Furthermore
,
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abroad
experiences
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might
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help
their career to have jobs.

In conclusion
, traditional education
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might
need when it
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comes
to
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studying
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own
culture’s
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subjects
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but
we need to encourage
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people
to educate international
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studying
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because
it is more useful than home
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country’s
literature.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
it will be effective to approach
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other
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nation’s
culture for their future life
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so
they should prepare it in advance.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Some teachers prefer announcing their quizzes in advance, while others prefer to give surprise quizzes. Talk about the advantages and disadvantages of surprise quizzes. use details and examples in your answers. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • Doesn't meet the criteria
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