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Some teachers prefer announcing their question in advance, while others prefer to give surprise questions. Talk about the advantage and disadvantage of surprise question. Use detail and examples in your answer. v.1

Some teachers prefer announcing their question in advance, while others prefer to give surprise questions. Talk about the advantage and disadvantage of surprise question. Use detail and examples in your answer. v. 1
It is a fact that, almost 80% of world's wealth is managed by 20% of the Countries. There are many people who think, it's the responsibility of developed countries to support poor countries with food and education. Yes, it is important for rich countries to support developing countries with food & education during a humanitarian crisis, but it should not be a long time policy. In this essay, I will put forth my views with suitable examples. Firstly, during a crisis like civil war or a natural disaster, it's important for developing countries to support the country in crisis, but it should be only till the time the country recovers from the crisis. If rich countries keep supporting poor countries, in the long run the host country will ever develop their own governing systems and this will have an adverse effect on the welfare of the people. For example, after the post war era, North Korea was completely dependent on Soviet union for their basic need like food, fuel, infrastructure etc. . But once the Soviet Union pulled out of the alliance, it led to the complete breakdown of the country. Secondly, instead of providing food and education, rich countries should help poor countries to develop their own policies and governing mechanism. If developing countries are completely dependent on aides from rich countries, then it will end with huge debts and it will lead to a full scale financial crisis. For example, some of the smaller countries in Asia pacific region, is still dependent on aides from developed countries like the US and France, this has completely drowned these smaller countries in debt. To sum up, I believe, when a country is in crisis, it's the prerogative of developed countries to support them, but this should be used as opportunity to hijack or interfere in their internal affairs.
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is managed
by 20% of the
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. There are
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think
, it's the responsibility of developed
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countries
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poor
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food
and education. Yes, it is
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important
for
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rich
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countries
to
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support
developing
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countries
with
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food
& education during a humanitarian
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crisis
,
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but
it should not be a long time policy. In this essay, I will put forth my views with suitable examples.

Firstly
, during a
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crisis
like civil war or a natural disaster, it's
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important
for developing
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countries
to
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support
the
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country
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,
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only
till the time the
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recovers from the
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. If
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rich
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countries
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supporting poor
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, in the long run the host
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country
will ever develop their
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governing systems and this will have an adverse effect on the welfare of the
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people
.
For example
, after the
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post war
era, North Korea was completely dependent on
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Soviet union
for their basic need like
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food
, fuel, infrastructure etc.
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.
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once the Soviet Union pulled out of the alliance, it led to the complete breakdown of the country.

Secondly
,
instead
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food
and education,
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rich
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countries
should
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help
poor
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countries
to develop their
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own
policies and governing mechanism. If developing
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countries
are completely dependent on aides from
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rich
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countries
, then it will
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end
with huge debts and it will lead to a full scale financial
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crisis
.
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,
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some of the
smaller
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countries
in Asia pacific region, is
still
dependent on aides from developed
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countries
like the US and France, this has completely drowned these smaller
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countries
in debt.

To sum up, I believe, when a
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country
is in
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crisis
, it's the prerogative of developed
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countries
to
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support
them,
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but
this should be
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used
as opportunity to hijack or interfere in their internal affairs.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some teachers prefer announcing their question in advance, while others prefer to give surprise questions. Talk about the advantage and disadvantage of surprise question. Use detail and examples in your answer. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
308 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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