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Some students would rather write a paper than take a test Other students would rather take a test instead of writing a paper Which option do you prefer and why Use specific reasons and examples to support you opinion v.1

Some students would rather write a paper than take a test Other students would rather take a test instead of writing a paper Which option do you prefer and why Use specific reasons and examples to support you opinion v. 1
IT IS AN EXCELLENT IDEA TO RESERVE MONEY ON THE RAILWAY PROJECTS BY THE REGIME. THIS ESSAY WILL COMPLETELY CONCUR WITH THE ABOVE NOTION DUE TO THE MAJOR ADVANTAGE OF DEVELOPING RAILWAYS THAT ROADS. FIRSTLY, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS WHY IT IS FUNDAMENTAL TO SPEND WEALTH ON THE RAILWAYS, AND SECONDLY, WHY THE IDEA OF DEVELOPIN ROADS IS NOT WORTHY. WHEN WE THINK FROM A PUBLIC POINT OF VIEW, RAILWAYS PROVID A COMFORATBLE, AFFORDABLE AND MAINLY CHEAPER COMMUTING. THIS GIVE AN ENORMOUS PROFITS TO THE GOVERNMENT AS IT COSTS A PENNY FOR CONSTRUCTING THE RAILWAYS. AND, PEOPLE ALSO CAN ABLE TO TRAVEL TROUGH RAILWAYS DUE TO THE LESS EXPENSIVE TICKETS. FOR EXAMPLE, THE UK REGIME DATA OF THE LAST YEAR SHOWED THAT 80% TOTAL EXPENCE CAME FROM RAILWAY AS MANY PREFER TO USE RAILWAYS TO SAVE MONEY FOR A MONTH. ON THE OTHER SIDE, IF THE AUTHORITY SPEND THEIR MONEY ON ROAD, THEIR ECONOMY NEVER BE RISED AS FAST AS OTHER DEVELOPED CONTINENTS OWNING THAT IT IS EXPENSIVE TO MAINTAIN A ROADS ALL THE COMING YEARS. AS THE AUTHORITY RESPONSIBLE TO FOR BUILDING THE PUBLIC AREAS. IF IT GOT DAMAGE, THEM THE REGIME HAS TO SPEND A ALMOST DOUBLED AMOUNT CURRANCY TO REPAR IT. THIS WOULD RESULT IN A ZERO LEVEL OF PROGRESS FRON AN ECONOMIC POINT OF VIEW. CONSEQUENTLY, THE TERRITORY WOULD FALL A DECADES BEHIND IN COMPARISON TO SUCCESSFUL TERITORIES. IN CONCLUSION, THE RAILWAYS AND THE ROADD BOTH THE MEANS OF TRANSPORTATIN FACILITIES INDEED CARRY FOLKS FROM ONE PLACE TO ANOTHER, BUT AN INDIVIDUAL CHOOSES THE TRANSPORT WHICH OFFERS THEM A AFFORDABLE, PRECIOUS TRAVEL TIME AND ENJOYABLE. THIS CAN ONLY HAPPEN, WHEN THE AUTHORITY SPENDS A MORE CURRANCY ON CONSTRUCTING VERIOUS RAILWAY SYSTEMS THAN ROADS.
IT IS AN EXCELLENT
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IDEA
TO RESERVE MONEY ON THE
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RAILWAY
PROJECTS BY THE REGIME. THIS ESSAY WILL COMPLETELY CONCUR WITH THE ABOVE NOTION DUE TO THE MAJOR ADVANTAGE OF DEVELOPING
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RAILWAYS
THAT
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ROADS
.
FIRSTLY
, THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS WHY IT IS FUNDAMENTAL TO
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SPEND
WEALTH ON THE
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RAILWAYS
, AND
SECONDLY
, WHY THE
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IDEA
OF
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DEVELOPIN
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ROADS
IS NOT WORTHY.

WHEN WE
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THINK
FROM A PUBLIC POINT OF VIEW,
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RAILWAYS
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PROVID
A
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COMFORATBLE
, AFFORDABLE AND
MAINLY
CHEAPER COMMUTING. THIS GIVE AN ENORMOUS
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PROFITS
TO THE
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GOVERNMENT
AS IT COSTS A PENNY FOR CONSTRUCTING THE
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RAILWAYS
. AND,
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PEOPLE
ALSO
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CAN ABLE TO
TRAVEL TROUGH
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RAILWAYS
DUE TO THE LESS EXPENSIVE TICKETS.
FOR EXAMPLE
, THE UK REGIME DATA OF THE LAST YEAR
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SHOWED
THAT 80% TOTAL
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EXPENCE
CAME FROM
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RAILWAY
AS
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MANY
PREFER TO
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USE
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RAILWAYS
TO SAVE MONEY FOR A MONTH.

ON THE OTHER SIDE, IF THE AUTHORITY
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SPEND
THEIR MONEY ON
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ROAD
, THEIR ECONOMY NEVER BE
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RISED
AS
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FAST
AS OTHER DEVELOPED CONTINENTS OWNING THAT IT IS EXPENSIVE TO MAINTAIN A
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ROADS
ALL THE COMING YEARS. AS THE AUTHORITY RESPONSIBLE TO FOR BUILDING THE PUBLIC AREAS. IF IT
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GOT
DAMAGE, THEM THE REGIME
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HAS TO
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SPEND
A ALMOST DOUBLED AMOUNT
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CURRANCY
TO
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REPAR
IT. THIS WOULD RESULT IN A ZERO LEVEL OF PROGRESS
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FRON
AN ECONOMIC POINT OF VIEW.
CONSEQUENTLY
, THE TERRITORY WOULD FALL A DECADES BEHIND
IN COMPARISON
TO SUCCESSFUL
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TERITORIES
.

IN CONCLUSION
, THE
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RAILWAYS
AND THE
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ROADD
BOTH THE MEANS OF
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TRANSPORTATIN
FACILITIES
INDEED
CARRY FOLKS FROM ONE PLACE TO ANOTHER,
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BUT
AN INDIVIDUAL CHOOSES THE TRANSPORT WHICH OFFERS THEM A AFFORDABLE, PRECIOUS TRAVEL TIME AND ENJOYABLE. THIS CAN
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ONLY
HAPPEN, WHEN THE AUTHORITY
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SPENDS
A MORE
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CURRANCY
ON CONSTRUCTING
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VERIOUS
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RAILWAY
SYSTEMS THAN
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ROADS
.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some students would rather write a paper than take a test Other students would rather take a test instead of writing a paper Which option do you prefer and why Use specific reasons and examples to support you opinion v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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