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some students prefer to work alone on an assignment while others in a group. what do u prefer? v.1

some students prefer to work alone on an assignment while others in a group. what do u prefer? v. 1
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negative
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people
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goods
is a beneficial

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people
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buy
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latest
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technological
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products
and that has led to a few
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negative
aspects such as a
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new
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technological
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products
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as a result
the cost of a ladies
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products
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people
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gadgets
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show
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people
become more lazy
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just
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because
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laptops
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individuals more likely to stay isolated causing of the
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new
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gadgets
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phone
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laptops
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products
have a more
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positive
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for example
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new
latest Android
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phone
has more features strong security system and more if location for in
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use
also
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good
quality in a
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technological
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devices
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speakers
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long lasting
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products
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bad
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things
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devices made our life easier and faster that for I suggest
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people
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products
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay some students prefer to work alone on an assignment while others in a group. what do u prefer? v. 1

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
335 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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